06年12月老六級(jí)作文點(diǎn)評(píng)及范文(點(diǎn)點(diǎn)英語版)

　　The Celebration of Western Festivals

　　1、現(xiàn)在國內(nèi)不少人喜歡過西方的一些節(jié)日

　　2、產(chǎn)生這種現(xiàn)象的原因

　　3、這種現(xiàn)象可能帶來的影響

　　Western festivals gain ever-increasing popularity in China. A growing number of people in China are immersed in the thrilling atmosphere of the upcoming Christmas. In comparison with the Spring Festival, the equally high status is given to Christmas by some of them.

　　There are a variety of factors contributing to this craze (trend). First, younger age groups are exposed to western culture and lifestyles through learning English. And festivals are regarded as the highlight of western culture. For example, Valentine's Day provides a vehicle for young adults to show their love. Second, the advancement of economy enables Chinese people to possess increased purchasing power. They are heavily targeted by businessmen, who view foreign festivals as golden opportunities to make money. So they desperately try to boost the atmosphere of foreign festivals.

　　The necessity of celebrating these foreign festivals is widely questioned. People involved are to blame for their loose traditional values. Our home-grown festivals play crucial roles in Chinese traditional culture. However, their foreign counterparts are exerting strong influence on people's values and thoughts. There is no doubt that we should give our priority to Chinese traditional festivals.

　　點(diǎn)評(píng)：

　　本次作文的類型屬于現(xiàn)象--解釋型文體。無論在體裁還是題材上都在大家的意料之中。難度并不是很大，從命題角度來說，是比較成功的，基本能達(dá)到考查學(xué)生寫作能力的要求。

　　從體裁上來看，屬于解釋一個(gè)現(xiàn)象的體裁。根據(jù)題目要求，考生分別需要寫出現(xiàn)象描述、原因剖析以及影響分析等三個(gè)段落。文章的結(jié)構(gòu)非常清晰，非常明確。這對(duì)于一般考生來說，并不是十分困難。能否取得高分的關(guān)鍵就是看考生的語言表達(dá)是否準(zhǔn)確，以及作文中是否出現(xiàn)閃光點(diǎn)。

　　從題材上來看，本次作文的話題是談?wù)剬?duì)西方節(jié)日的看法。和以往的六級(jí)考試作文的題材一樣，依舊側(cè)重于社會(huì)話題，而且是考生耳熟能詳?shù)脑掝}，這就意味著當(dāng)考生拿到這個(gè)作文題目的時(shí)候有話可說，有話可寫。所以對(duì)于以后備考六級(jí)的考生來說，社會(huì)話題依然是需要重點(diǎn)關(guān)注和準(zhǔn)備的。