2007年12月大學(xué)英語(yǔ)四級(jí)沖刺---寫作強(qiáng)化（四）

　　第一步集中在語(yǔ)法上：

　　1) 每個(gè)句子是否都有謂語(yǔ)動(dòng)詞;

　　2) 動(dòng)詞的時(shí)態(tài)和語(yǔ)態(tài);

　　3) 主謂搭配是否恰當(dāng);

　　4) 代詞與其指代的事物是否一致;

　　5) 標(biāo)點(diǎn)符號(hào)。

　　第二步在拼寫上

　　常見(jiàn)錯(cuò)誤舉例：

　　1) 無(wú)主語(yǔ)

　　(1) After graduated from university, I began to work in a company.

　　(2) Do you know why must protect our environment?

　　(3) Have you seen a man without enough food but had a healthy body?

　　2) 無(wú)主謂結(jié)構(gòu)

　　(1) For another reason. When we have a vacation, it will be convenient to ride a bike.

　　(2) Lived in the country, no loud noise, no dirty air, but quiet and fresh.

　　3) 無(wú)連接詞

　　(1) But a person has not enough food, he will not have a healthy body.

　　(2) China is a developing country, most people cannot afford a car yet.

　　4) 主語(yǔ)使用錯(cuò)誤

　　(1) Rich doesn’t mean a happy life.

　　(2) Without a friend will feel alone.

　　(3) However, making friends should be careful.

　　5) “there be”用法錯(cuò)誤

　　(1) There are many students read books in the classroom.

　　(2) There are few person can afford a car in our country.

　　(3) There are many things must be done to deal with energy crisis.

　　6) 舉例用法錯(cuò)誤

　　(1) We should take some sports. For example, football, basketball and so on.

　　7) 不完全句

　　(1) Nowadays, if you want to find a job. Then you must pass the College English Test.

　　8) 分詞使用錯(cuò)誤

　　(1) Comparing with other countries, China pays little attention to the energy problem.

　　(2) Looking at from above, this picture gives us an image of a lion.

　　9)單詞用法錯(cuò)誤(冠詞、代詞、形容詞、副詞等)

　　Nothing succeeds like success!