新東方版：2008年12月英語(yǔ)四級(jí)作文范文及點(diǎn)評(píng)

　　• 上海新東方學(xué)校 汪忠平

　　• 這次的四級(jí)考試寫(xiě)作題是我們?cè)谏虾Ｐ聳|方的課堂里重點(diǎn)預(yù)測(cè)的題目之一(我們?cè)�題是Disposal Products)。因?yàn)閺耐�年作文考察范圍�?lái)看，四級(jí)寫(xiě)作主題大部分是大學(xué)校園生活，其次就是和人們?nèi)粘Ｉ�活相關(guān)的一些題目。而國(guó)家今年五月剛剛下達(dá)禁塑令!四、六級(jí)發(fā)展二十年，考過(guò)很多題，重復(fù)過(guò)一些題，可考的題也就那么幾道了。

　　• 其實(shí)考什么并不重要。重要的是從不同的題目中找到寫(xiě)作共同的規(guī)律。分析以往試題，除了應(yīng)用性題材(相對(duì)較少)其他文章開(kāi)頭一般要先寫(xiě)個(gè)背景介紹;主體部分要么分析原因、要么列舉影響;最后大多總結(jié)、建議。

　　• 在我們的課堂講解中，對(duì)于這篇文章我們開(kāi)頭介紹了一些常用句型。當(dāng)然實(shí)考中考生沒(méi)有必要把開(kāi)頭寫(xiě)這么長(zhǎng)。主體部分我們即交代了原因分析也交代了影響列舉的框架。根據(jù)這次命題提綱，我們只需要選擇其中的影響部分。不管寫(xiě)原因還是影響，如果要寫(xiě)得充實(shí)些，要學(xué)會(huì)一些主體論證的方法。我們的課堂里介紹過(guò)幾種方法，同學(xué)們也是只需要選擇其中一兩種就可以了。

　　以下是我們上課時(shí)帶同學(xué)一起寫(xiě)得原文，僅供同學(xué)參考：

　　• Limiting the Use of Disposal Bags

　　• These days disposal products often hit the headlines of newspapers and have been brought into focus of the public. Indeed, it is widely accepted that they have gained increasing popularity among people in all walks of life. Taking a look around you, you can find examples too numerous to list: When you walk on the street, you can see plastic bags flying over your head; When you ramble along the river, you can find plastic bottles floating on the water; When you stroll in the park with your lover, you can notice waste paper thrown everywhere.

　　• Among the most important reasons often cited by people is the quickening pace of modern life. They are often too busy to wash dirty dishes or glasses, as a result they can do nothing but use disposal products. Also playing a part is the improvement of people's life. As a result of the policy of opening and reform, an increasing number of people are much richer than before and can afford disposal products. (原因)

　　• Admittedly, they might benefit us in a short term. Unfortunately, they will do us harm in more than one way. The major harm is (that) they are sure to pollute the environment. To make matters worse, they are likely to have potential harm to public health. To illustrate this point, I can think of no better example than HP, the river through S. As a result of disposal products in it, the water has caused some diseases in the local people. (影響)

　　• To sum up, for the factors mentioned before, we can safely reach the conclusion that the prevalence of disposale products is bound to cause a chain of undesirable effects. In view of the present situation, it is high time that the government tried every means to protect the environment. Only in this way, can we have a bright future.