名師點(diǎn)撥：英語四六級(jí)高分作文的寫作模式

　　 首段示例 2 ：

　　 標(biāo)題： Can Schoolchildren Start Using the Internet?
　　 提綱： 1 ）隨著科技的發(fā)展，網(wǎng)絡(luò)越來越普及；
2 ）網(wǎng)絡(luò)有其優(yōu)點(diǎn)但也有缺點(diǎn)；
3 ）我的觀點(diǎn)

　　 根據(jù)上面的提示，首段可有下列幾種方式：
1) Nowadays, using the Internet has become a fashion. Many parents begin to teach their children to use the Internet. However, there are diverse opinions on this. Some think it wise, but I don't agree with them.

2) Today, the Internet is becoming more and more common. It begins to play a more and more important role in our society and life. It's so useful that most adults are learning how to use it. What about children? Of course they can start using it.

3) Today, with the development of science and technology, the Internet is beginning to play a more and more important role in our life. More and more people are starting to use the Internet, including schoolchildren. However, I think schoolchildren are too young to start using the Internet.

4) According to a recent survey, Internet users are becoming younger and younger, and Internet bars have become a resort for schoolchildren who log in to chat or play games. Faced with this phenomenon, many people argue for measures to prevent schoolchildren from using the Internet, and I think they have their reasons.

2 ． 結(jié)論段的寫作
　　 結(jié)論一般采用歸納概括、主題重述或提建議等方式。

　　 常見的方式有：
1 ） 重述或總結(jié)主題
　　 重述主題指于結(jié)論處以另外一種表達(dá)方式重申主題，與首段照應(yīng)。
Families offer us warmth and care. Friends give us strength and horizon. They both help us understand the world as it is. Both of them are the dearest parts in our life.

2 ） 提出建議
Since postcards do us more harm and good, since we have many other ways to convey our feelings and promote our friendship, I hope everyone will take actions now to stop using postcards.

3 ） 概括總結(jié)
As we can see from the above, living in the suburb we can stay away from pollution, lead an easy leisure time, and needn't invest too much money, so I prefer living in the suburb to living in the city.

4 ） 引用名人名言
In particular, I enjoy what Francis Bacon said "Studies serve for delight, for ornament and for ability."

5) 綜合法
　　 與首段一樣，結(jié)論段也可以是多種方法的綜合。一般說來，總結(jié)加建議的比較多。

尾段示例 1 ：

　　 如 " 網(wǎng)絡(luò) " 的結(jié)論段可以如下所示：
10 ） As we all know, the next century will become one of the Internet. Internet will become more and more important in both our daily life and our work. So I suggest that schoolchildren should start using the Internet.

11 ） So I think schoolchildren not only can start using the Internet, but also should start using it They are sure to benefit a lot from the internet.

12 ） Internet can help our children know the world, get useful information and enrich their knowledge. So I think schoolchildren can start using the Internet.

13 ） In a word (In conclusion/ In summary/ To sum up / In short), the Internet is playing a more and more important role in our life and it is helpful for children's growth both physically and mentally. It is better for them to start using the Internet as early as possible.