新東方名師指導(dǎo)：四級(jí)考試寫作范文及點(diǎn)評(píng)

　　There is some truth in both arguments, but human’s life and property outweighs anything else. If smoking brings us illness and death, why not have it banned by the government? Without cigarettes, can’t we come up with better ways to express our friendship and to make us refreshed?注：1. outweigh 比……重要，同樣的表達(dá)：be superior to/ be inferior to。overweight 超重2. 最后用兩句反問句結(jié)尾，非常精妙。

　　課后作業(yè) Private Cars

　　寫成4段的首段寫法：

　�、� In recent years, with fast economic growth, private cars have appeared in many families in China. People's attitude toward private cars varies widely.

　　② With the increase in the general standard of living, some ordinary Chinese families begin to afford a private car. Yet, people's opinions of private cars vary from person to person/ public attitude toward it varies greatly/ widely./ is quite of the contrary./ differs sharply.

　�、� In recent few years, the phenomenon/ issue/ problem of owning a private car has been brought to public attention/ in the limelight. People's views on/ opinions of owing a private car vary widely.

　　寫成3段的首段寫法：

　　With the development of modern society/ science and technology, / With the improvement of people's living standard,

　　more and more people can own private cars.

　　cars are entering ordinary families.

　　the growing number of people/ people in ever increasing numbers can have access to private cars.(此句是引言)

　　支持段的主題句：

　　Some people claim that/ As is pointed out that/ It is generally believed that/ It is widely accepted that, there are some advantages of owning a private car.

　　There is no doubt that private cars benefit people hugely.

　　支持段的分論點(diǎn)：

　�、� 方便 First, private cars provide people with the most convenient form of transportation.

　　② 舒適 Second, it is comfortable for people to travel in, especially in changeable weather/ raining days/ sand storm.