1.individuals,characters, folks替換(people ,persons)
2: positive, favorable, rosy (美好的),promising
(有希望的),perfect, pleasurable , excellent, outstanding, superior替換good
3:dreadful, unfavorable, poor, adverse, ill (有害的)替換bad
如果bad做表語,可以有be less impressive替換
eg.An army of college students indulge themselves in playing games, enjoying romance with girls/boys or killing time passively in their dorms. When it approaches to graduation ,as a result, they find their academic records are less impressive.
4.(an army of, an ocean of, a sea of, a multitude of ,a host of, many, if not most)替換many.
注:用many, if not most 一定要小心,many后一定要有詞。
Eg. Many individuals, if not most, harbor the idea that….同理 用most, if not all ,替換most.
5: a slice of, quiet a few , several替換some
6:harbor the idea that, take the attitude that,
hold the view that, it is widely shared that,
it is universally acknowledged that)替think
(因為是書面語,所以要加that)
7:affair ,business ,matter 替換thing
8: shared 代 common
9.reap huge fruits 替換get many benefits )
10:for my part ,from my own perspective 替換 in my opinion