備戰(zhàn)2009年12月新四級(jí)綜合題型：突破改錯(cuò)題

　　例：1)Business today whether it is running a little gas-station or a big factory take good management.[takes]

　　A break in their employment, or a decision to work part time, will slow its raises and promotions-because it would for men. [their]

　　3.邏輯混淆，詞性誤用，放棄僻題原則

　　邏輯錯(cuò)誤：重點(diǎn)考一種，肯定還是否定的問題。

　　Blood pressure drugs definitely help some people live after a heart attack, but these same drugs may be both necessary and harmful for those with only mild blood pressure problems. [unnecessary]

　　詞性誤用：介詞連詞誤用，形容詞副詞誤用

　　放棄僻題：對(duì)于過于生僻的考點(diǎn)，如果無法找出錯(cuò)誤與其浪費(fèi)時(shí)間不如合理放棄，因?yàn)榉艞壱彩且环N智慧，下邊我會(huì)結(jié)合文章給大家講解些何為僻題

　　4.最后通讀全文，進(jìn)行復(fù)檢

　　再瀏覽改后的全文，看全篇是否語(yǔ)意通順，注意無錯(cuò)行一般是一行。要按照絕對(duì)規(guī)范的要求去答題。

　　實(shí)戰(zhàn)演練

　　Culture refers to the social heritage of a people- the learned patterns for thinking ,feeling and acting that characterize a population or society, include the expression of these patterns in material things.

　　本題考點(diǎn)：謂與非謂語(yǔ)經(jīng)常混，謂語(yǔ)句中就一個(gè)

　　本文已經(jīng)有兩個(gè)謂語(yǔ)refers characterize 一個(gè)連詞that,如果再出現(xiàn)謂語(yǔ)則必須再出現(xiàn)一個(gè)謂語(yǔ)。因?yàn)橐粋�(gè)基本規(guī)則請(qǐng)同學(xué)們記好：連詞數(shù)=謂語(yǔ)數(shù)-1。所以此時(shí)include 后面有賓語(yǔ)最好的改寫方式：including

　　Culture is compose of nonmaterial culture abstract creations like values, beliefs, customs, and institutional arrangements-and material culture-physical object like cooking spots ,computers and bathtubs.

　　本題考點(diǎn)：

　　1)謂與非謂語(yǔ)經(jīng)常混，謂語(yǔ)句中就一個(gè):compose—composed

　　2) 見到名詞想可數(shù)，可數(shù)不可數(shù)要記清: object-objects

　　In sum, culture reflects both the ideas we share or everything we make.

　　本題考點(diǎn)：

　　見到平行看結(jié)構(gòu)，形式功能要對(duì)稱

　　both A or B—改為both and

　　In ordinary speech, a person of culture is the individual can speak another language- the person who is unfamiliar with the arts,music, literature, philosophy, or history.