當莘莘學子邁入大學校門,他們滿懷憧憬卻也舉目茫然。面對全新的課程設置和寬泛的選擇范圍,他們究竟該如何選擇呢?怎樣的課程安排才能最有益于他們的發(fā)展呢?
University Courses
Many young people go to universities without a clear idea of what they are going to do. If one considers the various courses offered, it is not hard to see how difficult it is for a student to select the course most suited to him. If a student goes to a university to acquire a broader perspective of life, he will undoubtedly benefit. Schools often have too restrictive an atmosphere. Most students would, I believe, profit by the exploration of different academic studies, especially the “all rounder” with no particular interest.① They should have a longer time to decide in what subject they want to take their degrees, so that in later life, they do not look back and regret.
There is, of course, another side to the question of how to make the best use of one’s time at university.② Some students, who are good at a particular branch of learning, may spend three or four years becoming a specialist, appearing with a first class Honors Degree but very little knowledge of what the rest of the world is all about. Therefore there will have to be much more detailed information in all fields. On the one hand, a band of specialists ignorant of anything outside their own subject, and on the other hand, an ever increasing number of graduates qualified in subjects for which there is little or no demand in the working world.③
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行文點評
本文結構清晰,過渡詞的使用使文章銜接自然。插入語的使用增加了句式的靈活性。
好文妙譯
大學課程
很多年輕人進入大學,卻并不清楚自己究竟想要做些什么?匆豢磳W校提供的種類繁多的課程,不難發(fā)現,學生選擇適合自己的課程的確不是一件易事。如果一個學生上大學是為了得到更廣闊的生活視野,他無疑會受益匪淺。然而,學校的氣氛常常很讓人拘束。我相信,很多學生,特別是那些沒有什么特殊愛好的“全能型學生”通過對不同學術研究的探索會收獲頗多。學生們應該有更多的時間決定他們真正想要獲得學位的學科,那樣在以后他們回首往事時就不會后悔。
詞匯斟酌
perspective n. 前途
undoubtedly ad. 無疑,必定
profit by/from 得益于,受益于
band n. 群,伙;樂隊
specialist n. 專家
ignorant a. 不懂的
佳句臨摹
、佟咀⑨尅縄 believe
插入語,強調,使得句式更加靈活
【臨摹】This, you know, is just my personal opinion. 這,你知道,只是我的個人看法。
【臨摹】One day, it is said, Newton saw an apple fall from a tree. 據說,有一天牛頓看到一個蘋果從樹上掉下來。
、凇咀⑨尅縨ake the best use of充分利用
【臨摹】We should make the best use of time when we are young.年輕時我們都應該充分利用時間。
、邸咀⑨尅縊n the one hand...and on the other hand…一方面…,另一方面…
思如泉涌
Dancing in all its forms cannot be excluded from the curriculum of all noble education: dancing with the feet, with ideas, with works, and, need I add that one must also be able to dance with the pen?所有高尚教育的課程表里都不能沒有各種形式的跳舞:用腳跳舞,用思想跳舞,用言語跳舞,不用說,還需用筆跳舞。
How much more profitable for the independent mind, after the mere rudiments of education , to range through a library at random, taking down books as the mother wit suggests!受到初步的基礎教育之后,對于愿意獨立思考的人來說,在圖書館里信手取下一本書來,根據個人的天賦隨意涉獵,這該有多大的好處啊!
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