2008年12月英語四六級作文預(yù)測：汶川地震

　　Directions: For this part, you are allowed 30 minutes to write a short essay entitled Hand in Hand We Stand. You should write at least 120 words following the outline given below in Chinese：

　　1. 汶川地震是中國遭受的一次大災(zāi)難;

　　2. 一方有難，八方支援，人們紛紛行動起來共同抗震救災(zāi);

　　3. 我們能做些什么。

　�、賹忣}及布局。此寫作題是一篇提綱式作文。在布局上，按照提綱的要求展開寫作即可。第一段指出地震發(fā)生的時間、地點和災(zāi)情;第二段講述全國人民對四川的捐助情況;第三段說明自己作為學(xué)生能為災(zāi)區(qū)做些什么。②語言。作為一篇記敘文，語言表達要準確生動，句式要多樣，詞匯要豐富，這樣可以增添文采。

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　　On May 12, 2008, an 8.0-magnitude earthquake struck Sichuan. Thousands of people lost their lives and even more people were left homeless. But, hand in hand, the Chinese people faced this disaster with compassion and courage.

　　People across China offered to make donations energetically. Relief materials and funds were continuously pouring into quake hit areas. What’s more, several rescue teams and medical professionals, at home and abroad, was sent to the earthquake stricken areas to search and rescue the survivals.

　　As far as we students are concerned, we should provide our helping hands for the earthquake stricken compatriots. We can donate our spare money to the suffering people who are in urgent need of food and medicine. Blood donation is also of vital significance for those injured people. Students who are equipped with professional skills can volunteer to the earthquake stricken areas to rescue more lives. Besides, our spirit support and sincere prayers can help the broken hearts overcome the temporary disaster.悐錢ᳯ⶿䳠䁗ᴿ娵http://cet.hjenglish.com©版權(quán)所有滬江網(wǎng)娵ᴿ䁗䳠⶿ᳯ錢悐

　　第一段開門見山，指出地震發(fā)生的時間和地點。其中，hand in hand “手挽手”、face this disaster with compassion and courage“用熱情和勇氣面對災(zāi)難”屬于高分表達，為文章增色不少。

　　第二段直接說明全國人民對災(zāi)區(qū)的捐助情況。What�餾 more的使用使文章層次分明，結(jié)構(gòu)清晰。make donations“捐贈”、pour into“涌入”這些都是高分表達。

　　第三段闡述自己作為學(xué)生能為災(zāi)區(qū)做點什么。Besides進一步說明，支持不光包括物質(zhì)方面，還包括精神方面。As far as one is concerned是表達自己觀點時的常用句型;in urgent need of “急切需要”;be equipped with“具備”均為高分表達。