2009年6月英語四級考前熱點高分范文(四)

　　Directions: For this part, you are allowed 30 minutes to write a composition on the topic Parental Hopes and Personal Ideals. You should write at least 120 words, and base your composition on the outline (given in Chinese) below:

　　1)父母都會望子成龍，但是父母的期望有時候會與他們孩子的理想發(fā)生矛盾

　　2)分析這種矛盾產生的原因

　　3)應該如何解決這一矛盾

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　　行文思路

　　本題屬于提綱式文字命題。提綱第1點提出一個問題，提綱第2點要求分析這一問題產生的原因，提綱第3點要求說明如何解決該問題，由此可判斷本文應為問題解決型作文。

　　根據(jù)所給提綱，本文應包含如下內容：描述父母的期望和孩子的理想之間的矛盾;分析這種矛盾產生的主要原因;說明解決這一矛盾的辦法。

　　高分范文

　　Parental Hopes and Personal Ideals

　　All parents hope their children will have a bright future. However, parents’ expectations for their children are not always [1]in accordance with their children’s personal ideals, [2]and sometimes they are even conflicting with each other. This is often a main cause for quarrels and gaps between parents and children. [3]But what lead to the conflict between parental hopes and personal ideals?

　　[3]The following three factors contribute to the conflict. [4]First of all, in this fast-changing society, parents and children have too many differences in mind. [4]Secondly, traditional patriarchy is still influencing Chinese parents in modern society. They are used to making decisions for their children. [4]Third, nowadays young people have strong independence, [5]who want to plan their own future and control their own destiny. [4]Thus the conflict between parents and children inevitably appear.

　　[6]In order to solve the conflict, both parents and children should pay their efforts. [4]For one thing, parents should give their children rights to make their own decisions. They may help their children make choices [7]instead of replacing them to make choices. [4]For another, children should learn to respect their parents’ advices [8]since parents tend to have more life experience. [4]Besides, to communicate with each other actively is necessary to their understanding each other. As long as both parents and children learn to think [9]from the other side’s point of view, the conflicts between them can be avoided.

　　【亮點點評】

　　[1]“和…一致”。

　　[2]表示遞進。