2009年6月英語(yǔ)四級(jí)考前熱點(diǎn)高分范文(七)

　　Directions: For this part, you are allowed 30 minutes to write a composition on the topic Social Practice of College Students. You should write at least 120 words, and base your composition on the outline (given in Chinese) below:

　　1)各大學(xué)在假期都會(huì)組織學(xué)生參加各種社會(huì)實(shí)踐活動(dòng)

　　2)這些活動(dòng)給大學(xué)生帶來了哪些好處

　　3)參加社會(huì)實(shí)踐活動(dòng)應(yīng)該注意些什么

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　　行文思路

　　本題屬于提綱式文字命題。提綱第1點(diǎn)指出一種現(xiàn)象，提綱第2點(diǎn)要求分析這種現(xiàn)象帶來的好處，提綱第3點(diǎn)要求指出注意事項(xiàng)，由此可判斷本文應(yīng)為現(xiàn)象解釋型作文。

　　根據(jù)所給提綱，本文應(yīng)包含如下內(nèi)容：概述大學(xué)生社會(huì)實(shí)踐活動(dòng)及其主要內(nèi)容;分析社會(huì)實(shí)踐活動(dòng)給大學(xué)生帶來的好處;指出大學(xué)生參加社會(huì)實(shí)踐應(yīng)該注意些什么。

　　高分范文

　　Social Practice of College Students

　　Nowadays many universities encourage and organize students to take part in social practice activities. During the holidays, more and more students choose to [1]be the volunteers, take part-time jobs, or take part in other practical activities alike. It’s obvious that social practice is playing a more and more important role in China’s college education.

　　[2]Undoubtedly, college students have [3]benefited a lot from social practice. [4]Above all, they are provided with more opportunities to contact the real world outside the campus. [4]Moreover, in social practice activities, students can [5]apply their knowledge to the solution to the practical problems. So their practical skills are improved greatly. [4]Besides, social practice helps [6]strengthen students’ sense of social responsibility.

　　[7]Considering the above-mentioned, I think, it is necessary for college students to participate in social practice. [4]However, social practice may bring some problems. For example, some students spend too much time in taking part-time jobs so as to ignore their study. [4]Therefore, we should try to [8]balance the relationship between social practice and study.

　　【亮點(diǎn)點(diǎn)評(píng)】

　　[1]平行結(jié)構(gòu)。alike意為“類似的”，作后置定語(yǔ)。

　　[2]“毫無疑問”，副詞使用恰當(dāng)。

　　[3]“從…中受益很多”。

　　[4]過渡銜接詞語(yǔ)，使文章條理清晰、銜接緊密。

　　[5]“把知識(shí)運(yùn)用到解決實(shí)際問題中”。

　　[6]“加強(qiáng)社會(huì)責(zé)任感”。

　　[7]用于得出結(jié)論。considering用作介詞，意為“考慮到，鑒于”。

　　[8]“平衡…之間的關(guān)系”。