2009年6月英語(yǔ)四級(jí)考前熱點(diǎn)高分范文(九)

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　　Directions: For this part, you are allowed 30 minutes to write a composition on the topic Students’ Pursuit for Famous Brands. You should write at least 120 words, and base your composition on the outline (given in Chinese) below:

　　1)現(xiàn)在很多大學(xué)生都喜歡追求名牌

　　2)產(chǎn)生這種現(xiàn)象的原因是什么

　　3)你如何看待這一現(xiàn)象

　　Students’ Pursuit for Famous Brands

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　　行文思路

　　本題屬于提綱式文字命題。提綱第1點(diǎn)指出一種現(xiàn)象，提綱第2點(diǎn)要求分析產(chǎn)生這種現(xiàn)象的原因，提綱第3點(diǎn)要求談?wù)劇拔摇睂?duì)該現(xiàn)象的看法，由此可判斷本文應(yīng)為現(xiàn)象解釋型作文。

　　根據(jù)所給提綱，本文應(yīng)包含如下內(nèi)容：描述目前熱衷于大學(xué)生追求名牌的現(xiàn)象;分析大學(xué)生熱衷名牌的原因;闡述“我”對(duì)大學(xué)生追求名牌的看法并提出建議。

　　高分范文

　　Students’ Pursuit for Famous Brands

　　Nowadays many college students like to pursue famous brands. From clothes to mobile phones, even study articles like electronic dictionaries and pens, they [1]are inclined to buy famous brands. [2]Moreover, many students from poor families begin to [3]follow this consumption trend as well. This phenomenon has aroused wide attention.

　　[4]The following reasons can account for college students’ preference for famous brands. [2]Above all, in many college students’ eyes, a famous brand is a symbol of sophistication and taste. They expect others to admire their high class and good taste. [2]What’s more, in modern society, famous brands to some extent are equal to fashion, [5]which has a great attraction to young college students. [2]Besides, parents’ spoiling their children helps form their bad consumption habit.

　　[2]As far as I am concerned, [6]it is irrational for college students to pursue famous brands. [3]After all, most of famous brands are [7]far beyond their consumption ability. [3]Besides, [8]it is not famous brands but a person’s noble character that really makes him high class. [3]Therefore, college students should attach more importance to cultivating a good character [9]rather than pursuing famous brands.