2010年6月大學英語四六級考試寫作全面解讀(4)

　　(5) There are some people who hold different opinions.

　　引出反對孩子學藝術(shù)的理由。

　　(6)使用As far as I am concerned引出自己的觀點。

　　(7) give a full play of their ability “充分發(fā)揮才能”

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　　【思路二】

　　第一段：對送孩子學藝術(shù)，人們觀點不一;有人贊成，有人反對，而我認為最適合的才是最好的;

　　第二段：我支持送孩子學藝術(shù)的理由;

　　第三段：我不贊成的做法及理由;重申個人觀點。

　　【范文二】

　　Should Parents Send their Kids to Art Classes?

　　(1)There is no denying the fact that it has become a prevailing trend for parents to send the children to art training classes of all kinds. Different people hold different views. Some contend that attending art classes can help nurture children’s interest and tap their potentials in such art as music, painting and dancing. However,others think forcing them to go to art classes may only restrict their freedom and affect their healthy growth. (2)Considering one after another, I believe that both sides have something right.

　　(3)For one thing, it must be admitted that going to art classes is and effective means to find out and give full play to children’s talent in art. For another, by attending art classed, the children can have an all-round development by acquiring knowledge and skills which are not taught in their schools. What’s more, it is conducive to their sound development. kids can also make a lot of friends there, thus their communication skills may also be sharpened.

　　(5) However, Every coin has two sides. These courses would bring about heavy burdens to students and thus oppose to this practice. In addition, the students might not have adequate time to take rest and reflect on what they have learned in school. Therefore, (6)it is not advisable for parents to deprive their children of the right to choose to learn what they truly like. Remember, the fittest is the best.

　　【點 評】

　　范文點評：

　　(1)使用句型There is no denying the fact tha引出現(xiàn)象，概括不同人的觀點，最后表明自己的立場。

　　(2) 使用Considering one after another引出自己的觀點。

　　(3)使用For one thing,…For another,…What’s more,…來擴展文章，從而使觀點層次清晰，論證有力。

　　(4) give full play to children’s talent，have an all-round development，be conducive to等成為文章亮點詞匯。

　　(5) 使用However使觀點發(fā)生轉(zhuǎn)折，引出自己不贊成的做法和理由。bring about heavy burdens to “是…的負擔”

　　(6) 使用it is not advisable for…to do …自己的建議。

　　(7)the fittest is the best. “最適合的就是最好的”，此句簡短有力，使自己的觀點更加鮮明。

　　2008年6月 六級真題實例

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　　【審 題】本題要求寫一篇議論文，屬觀點對立型和問題解決型作文的糅合與拼接�？碱}屬于常規(guī)性題目，但又與時俱進，側(cè)重于對校園內(nèi)學生除學習外的娛樂方式的關(guān)注。選材體現(xiàn)了當今社會教育取向的變化，由關(guān)注學生學習成績向全面發(fā)展素質(zhì)教育轉(zhuǎn)變。

　　【思路一】第一段：引入現(xiàn)象：現(xiàn)在娛樂活動多種多樣并列舉其益處及原因;

　　第二段：列舉娛樂活動的弊處及原因;

　　第三段：表明自己的觀點態(tài)度：寓樂于學。

　　【范文一】

　　Recreational Activities

　　(1) When it comes to recreational activities， different people hold different views. (2) Some people think those recreational activities are great and necessary, because they can help people relax from the hard work and study. (3) Some of the activities, such as hiking, jogging, can help people relax physically; (3) while some of them, such as surfing the Internet, can help people relax mentally.

　　(4) However, other people hold that so many kinds of recreational activities may have a bad effect on our lives. Some people may not resist some temptations from those activities, and indulge themselves in those activities. At last they are (5) lured away from their study or their work.

　　(6) In my opinion, we should pay more attention to the advantages of various recreational activities and make the most of them. Meanwhile, we should learn how to use those activities positively and make them a helpful tool for our development. 【點 評】

　　(1) 開門見山，引出主題

　　(2) 引出支持者的觀點及原因

　　(3) 列舉有益處的娛樂活動

　　(4) 話鋒一轉(zhuǎn)，引出反對者的觀點及原因

　　(5) 精彩短語：受誘惑而荒廢學業(yè)或工作

　　(6) 闡述我的觀點：寓樂于學

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　　【思路二】第一段引入現(xiàn)象：現(xiàn)在娛樂活動多種多樣;

　　第二段列舉娛樂活動的弊益及原因;

　　第三段表明自己的觀點態(tài)度：不能因噎廢食，建議娛樂要有度。