2010年6月大學英語四六級考試寫作全面解讀(7)

　　1. 當今，能源短缺成為越來越嚴重的問題;

　　2. 如果采取適當?shù)拇胧�，這個問題是可以解決的;

　　3. 我的看法。

　　【思路點撥】

　　典型的問題解決型作文。根據(jù)提綱本文各部分內(nèi)容應包括：開門見山指出當前存在的資源緊缺的問題極其嚴重性;以說理或舉例的方式來說明這一問題是可以解決的;總結并陳述“我”的看法。

　　【參考范文】

　　How to Solve the Energy Shortage

　　Energy shortage is a very serious problem in the world. Many people worry that energy resources on the earth will be exhausted if we use them in an unchecked way. This, most people agree, will cause serious problems and even crisis and jeopardize the survival of mankind .

　　On the one hand, most people agree that the problem can be solved in one way or another. One is to conserve and save our energy. Energy refers not only to coal, oil, or natural gases but also to goods, land and water, etc. Most countries have realized the wastefulness in their using of energy. They are trying to conserve energy. For example, some countries have a daylight saving system to use less electricity for lighting. Some cities have enforced water savers at public such as restrooms and bars. Some have enforced serious penalties on overuse of electricity, water, and farming land. By these means, people hope the drain on energy resources could be slowed down.

　　However, conservation alone cannot solve the problem. Another way, perhaps the best I think, is to develop new energy resources. Obviously, no matter how hard we try to save energy resources and how abundant they are, we will use them up sooner or later. I think there are many energy resources that we can develop and utilize. We don't have to depend only on the current conventional energy resources. There are many other energy resources that we can develop such as nuclear power, waterpower and solar power. These resources, if developed, can completely replace the conventional energy and thus solve the problem of energy shortage.

　　【點評】

　　文本是問題解決型作文。文章首先提出能源匱乏這一現(xiàn)象，接著討論這個問題的解決方式，并提出自己的看法。符合提綱中的要求。另外文章亮點不斷，例如：one way or another，conserve energy，slowed down，sooner or later等等。

　　例文二

　　Directions: For this part, you are allowed 30 minutes to write a composition on the topic A Letter of Appeal. You should write at least 120 words and you should base your composition on the outline given below:

　　在過去幾年中，我們已經(jīng)目睹了人類活動引起的各種災害。作為一位大學生，請寫一封倡議書，呼吁大家關注這些自然災害并保護環(huán)境，內(nèi)容應包括：

　　1.舉出人類活動引發(fā)的災害的實例;

　　2.指出一些必要的防范措施;

　　3.號召大家行動起來拯救地球。

　　【思路點撥】

　　本題要求寫一封倡議書。首先應明確的是這是應用文，要注意其開頭的格式。其次從主體內(nèi)容上來說，還是提綱式作文的一貫思路。首先點明寫信的目的：呼吁大家關注人類活動對地球造成的危害，陳述災害的具體表現(xiàn);為了拯救地球，我們應當采取哪些措施;號召大家行動起來拯救地球。

　　【參考范文】

　　A Letter of Appeal

　　June 13, 2008

　　Dear friends,

　　I am writing this letter to call on everyone to pay attention to the present disasters caused by human activities. As some of you may know, over the past years, floods, droughts, landslides, and dust storms have frequented our planet. Not long ago, tsunami swept the Southeast Asia, which caused enormous damage. All these have sounded an alarm to human beings. So it is high time that we join efforts to save our planet.

　　Above all, a task of top priority for us is to plant trees as many as possible, especially in the arid areas. At the same time, we should stop deforesting in large amount. And we can save our planet through many other ways, such as saving water and using recycled paper.

　　So don't hesitate to act out these measures. Even a small action is meaningful to our planet. Please join us in the action of protecting our planet. If you are willing to do something to save our planet, please start from the little thing right around you. Thank you!

　　Sincerely yours,

　　Li Ming

　　【點評】

　　本文是一封倡議書信。首先文章形式上符合書信的格式。在內(nèi)容上首先說明寫作目的，接著提出自己的倡議。最后發(fā)出呼吁，并表示感謝。語言上，亮點不斷，如：call on，pay attention to，frequented our planet，sounded an alarm to，in large amount，act out these measures等等。