2010年6月大學(xué)英語四六級考試寫作全面解讀(9)

　　第五章 實戰(zhàn)演練——六級作文模擬訓(xùn)練及范文

　　模擬訓(xùn)練一

　　Directions: For this part, you are allowed 30 minutes to write a composition on the topic Attending TV PK shows does(or does not) good to young people. You should write at least 150 words, and base your composition on the outline (given in Chinese) below:

　　1. 現(xiàn)在各種各樣的電視選秀節(jié)目吸引了許多年輕人;

　　2. 為了實現(xiàn)明星夢，一些年輕人甚至放棄了學(xué)業(yè)，這種現(xiàn)象引起了許多關(guān)注;

　　3. 你怎么看?為什么?

　　Attending TV PK Shows Does (No) Good to Young People

　　模擬訓(xùn)練二

　　Directions: For this part, you are allowed 30 minutes to write a composition on the topic Where There is a Will There is a Way. You should write at least 150 words according to the outline given below in Chinese:

　　1.簡單解釋對此諺語的理解;

　　2.用失敗與成功的實例說明毅力對于成功的重要性;

　　3.總結(jié)全文。

　　Where There is a Will There is a Way

　　模擬訓(xùn)練三

　　Directions: For this part, you are allowed 30 minutes to write a composition on the topic A Campaign Speech. You should write at least 150 words according to the outline given below in Chinese:

　　1. 你認為自己具備什么條件(能力、性格、愛好)學(xué)生會主席?

　　2. 如果當(dāng)選，你將會為校園學(xué)生做什么?

　　A Campaign Speech

　　參考范文

　　模擬訓(xùn)練一

　　【范文】

　　Attending TV PK Shows Does No Good to Young People

　　In recent years, TV PK shows are great hits in China and have attracted many young people.Some youngsters even give up their studies to attend these shows in the hope of becoming famous overnight.Some people think these shows provide young people more chance to show talents, while others believe that attending these shows does no good to the young people.As for me, I prefer to the latter opinion.

　　It should be admitted that some young people like Li yuchun have stood out from the numerous attendants in the PK show, but that doesn’t mean attending the PK shows is a good way to become successful for young people.Several factors contribute to my argument.First of all, TV PK shows breed restlessness and induce young people to hunt after fame at whatever cost.Secondly, TV PK shows can subvert the youngsters’ values.They think attending the PK shows is a shortcut to the success, so they may despise the way of achieving success by hard work.Finally, if the young people fail in these shows, they will suffer a psychological unbalance.

　　To sum up, entering for TV PK shows is not a good way for young people to make a success.I suggest young people should think twice before deciding to attend PK shows.

　　【點評】

　　文章以描述現(xiàn)在各種各樣的電視選秀節(jié)目吸引許多年輕人開始進入主題，人們對此持不同觀點。第一段文章結(jié)尾作者表明參加電視選秀節(jié)目對年輕人沒有好處，接著說明自己的理由，最后使用In a word引出對文章的總結(jié)，并提醒年輕人要三思而后行。另外，本文使用了一些精彩的語句，使文章增色不少，例如：great hits，in the hope of，does no good to，hunt after fame at whatever cost，suffer a psychological unbalance，think twice before deciding等等。

　　模擬訓(xùn)練二

　　【范文】

　　Where There is A Will,There is A Way

　　Where there is a will, there is a way.This statement means that if you are really determined to do something, however difficult it might be, you will eventually find a way to do it well.The important point is that you must have the will to achieve success.

　　Ninety percent of the failures that occur are due to the fact that there is no strong will involved.Many people simply say that they want something, but they do not make any attempt to achieve it.So, instead of getting it, they use the feeblest excuse to explain the situation away.

　　Only those with an undaunted will and spirit can fight their way to final victory.Many a famous man has the same experience.They have attained their status because they have had the will to overcome apparently insuperable obstacles.Many artists,statesmen,writers and inventors have managed to succeed because they possess a fierce will,which has helped them to achieve success.