考試吧文都：2010年6月四級(jí)作文點(diǎn)評(píng)及優(yōu)秀范文

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　　總體來(lái)講這篇四級(jí)作文出的基本中規(guī)中矩。

　　從結(jié)構(gòu)來(lái)看屬于典型的給定觀點(diǎn)的文章，三段論很清晰，任務(wù)很明確。能用到的語(yǔ)言也在我們的預(yù)測(cè)范圍之內(nèi)。

　　第一段，開(kāi)頭的句子我們就可以寫(xiě)到：Now we are entering a brand new era full of opportunities and innovations, and great changes have taken place in people's attitude towards some traditional practice只是緊接著只需要把spelling放到后面點(diǎn)明即可。后面加上一句This issue has been brought into public focus and called for further concern.

　　第一段就圓滿了。

　　第二段開(kāi)頭任務(wù)明確寫(xiě)原因：

　　開(kāi)頭句子給大家備好了：

　　A number of factors could account for the problem, but the following are the most critical ones.

　　這段的內(nèi)容是比較好想的，第一個(gè)原因我準(zhǔn)備從信息角度入手，并且在內(nèi)容的預(yù)測(cè)上我也是給同學(xué)們準(zhǔn)備了信息方面的句子。

　　First, information is expanding at such an increasing rate that our society is called the one of information. The information is so immense that students haven' t ample energy and time to deal deeply with spelling,這里我用到了很好的代詞:one,和句式：so…that…既然是范文我就自己小小的發(fā)揮了一下：some computer programs, such as word ,have done the spelling checking work for us .

　　第二個(gè)原因：萬(wàn)惡考為首，

　　Second, the standardized-test oriented way of English learning, in which the high score can be achieved without spelling, put students to the position in which they have the quite reason to ignore spelling.

　　在這個(gè)句子中用到了同學(xué)們熟悉的表達(dá)：put students to the position.還很拽的用到了一個(gè)主干隔離結(jié)構(gòu)in which the high score can be achieved without spelling，一個(gè)好的單詞test oriented以什么為目標(biāo)。

　　這段也很圓滿。

　　第三段:這段更是平淡無(wú)奇：

　　但開(kāi)頭的句子是沒(méi)有問(wèn)題的，我們很熟悉的開(kāi)頭句。

　　This issue may lead to a number of unfavorable consequences, with the following two the most serious.

　　后面有兩種寫(xiě)法：

　　一種是寫(xiě)危害：

　　但是誠(chéng)實(shí)的講我認(rèn)為這個(gè)現(xiàn)象沒(méi)有什么太大的危害，但是不寫(xiě)的話又無(wú)話可說(shuō)了。

　　我自己也是想了很久才想到了兩點(diǎn)所謂的危害。

　　For one thing ,… for another ,這樣的句子和京劇里面的亮相是一個(gè)概念。

　　For one thing, the information would be incorrect when conveyed by hand- writing way and cause some bad effects. For another, we may indulge ourselves in this way of inaccuracy which may influence our attitude of learning or research.

　　這兩個(gè)危害我是憋了好久才想出來(lái)了，又不敢寫(xiě)的太難，大家就將就看了，

　　有危害總要解決下吧，咱的強(qiáng)項(xiàng)啊!

　　The awareness of the importance of this issue should be enhanced and some proper measures should be taken. It is reasonable for us to believe that the situation will be improved in the near future. 多棒的結(jié)尾啊!

　　還有一種寫(xiě)法就是：直接寫(xiě)解決的方法會(huì)簡(jiǎn)單些 ：

　　In view of the importance of this issue , effective measures should be taken before things get worse. For one thing, it is essential that students should be encouraged to use less automatic spelling checking tools.(回憶下上課講的上下義詞) For another, spelling should be highlighted in the English test ,such as CET-4 and CET 6.What’s more ,the public should enhance their awareness of the importance of spelling .With these measures taken, it is reasonable for us to believe that the situation of poor spelling will be improved in the near future.

　　針對(duì)不同的兩個(gè)原因提出兩個(gè)不同的解決方法。

　　參考范文：

　　Now we are entering a brand new era full of opportunities and innovations, and great changes have taken place in people's attitude towards some traditional practice, especially in the area of English learning , one of which is less attention has been given to spelling by college students . This issue has been brought into public focus and called for further concern.

　　A number of factors could account for the problem, but the following are the most critical ones. First, information is expanding at such an increasing rate that our society is called the one of information. The information is so immense that students haven' t ample energy and time to deal deeply with spelling, and some computer programs, such as word ,have done the spelling checking work for us . Second, the standardized-test oriented way of English learning, in which the high score can be achieved without spelling, put students to the position in which they have the quite reason to ignore spelling.

　　This issue may lead to a number of unfavorable consequences, with the following two the most serious. For one thing, the information would be incorrect when conveyed by hand- writing way and cause some bad effects. For another, we may indulge ourselves in this way of inaccuracy which may influence our attitude of learning or research. The awareness of the importance of this issue should be enhanced and some proper measures should be taken. It is reasonable for us to believe that the situation will be improved in the near future.

　　三段的第二種寫(xiě)法：In view of the importance of this issue , effective measures should be taken before things get worse. For one thing, it is essential that students should be encouraged to use less automatic spelling checking tools. For another, spelling should be highlighted in the English test ,such as CET-4 and CET 6.What’s more ,the public should enhance their awareness of the importance of spelling .With these measures taken, it is reasonable for us to believe that the situation of poor spelling will be improved in the near future.