距離2014年6月14日的大學(xué)英語四級(jí)考試還有1天時(shí)間,老師提醒廣大考生在這短短的兩天時(shí)間里,一定不要松懈復(fù)習(xí),尤其是在寫作方面。因?yàn)椋瑢懽鞅緛砭褪且粋(gè)日積月累的過程,一旦疏于練習(xí),就很容易影響寫作水平的發(fā)揮,提筆忘字也不無可能。更為重要的是,通常,我們認(rèn)為,寫作是在備考最后階段最能給我們提分的環(huán)節(jié),如果勤于練習(xí),熟悉寫作話題,那么在考試過程中就會(huì)下筆有神,從而取得可喜的效果。下面,是文都老師給大家提供的一個(gè)寫作話題,希望大家在認(rèn)真獨(dú)立完成寫作后,再結(jié)合點(diǎn)評(píng)與參考范文進(jìn)行對(duì)照,熟記其中的經(jīng)典表達(dá)及句型句式。
【考前預(yù)測(cè)】
Directions: For this part, you are allowed 30 minutes to write a composition on the topic Competition. You should write at least 120 words following the outline given below in Chinese:
1. 競(jìng)爭(zhēng)使人們充滿創(chuàng)造力,使人們更有效率;
2. 競(jìng)爭(zhēng)促使生產(chǎn)出更好的產(chǎn)品和提供更優(yōu)質(zhì)的服務(wù);
3. 競(jìng)爭(zhēng)促進(jìn)了社會(huì)的進(jìn)一步發(fā)展。
【參考范文】
Competition
Competition makes people more creative and effective. It urges them to plan better, to try harder, and to achieve more. With a desire to excel in their work, people tend to perform more creatively and more efficiently.
Competition helps produce better products and provide better services. In the present world of intense competition, every manufacturer tries his best to outmatch his competitor by producing goods of better quality at lower costs. As a result, consumers pay less and receive better service.
Competition promotes further development of society. If there were no competition, people would remain complacent and be unwilling to make any efforts or risk anything new. However, with fierce competition going on, they exert themselves to accomplish more. Their accomplishment will, in one way or another, contribute to the progress of society.
【范文解析】
本篇范文采用經(jīng)典的三段式寫作方法展開,第一段呼應(yīng)題目的第一個(gè)方面,即競(jìng)爭(zhēng)使人們充滿創(chuàng)造力,使人們更有效率;第二段呼應(yīng)題目的第二個(gè)方面,即競(jìng)爭(zhēng)促使生產(chǎn)出更好的產(chǎn)品和提供更優(yōu)質(zhì)的服務(wù);第三段呼應(yīng)題目的第三個(gè)方面,即競(jìng)爭(zhēng)促進(jìn)了社會(huì)的進(jìn)一步發(fā)展。本文的突出之處在于篇章結(jié)構(gòu)清晰,銜接合理,在呼應(yīng)題目要求的同時(shí),做了進(jìn)一步的擴(kuò)展,行文流暢。
【高分妙招】
四級(jí)作文很關(guān)注社會(huì)熱點(diǎn)現(xiàn)象、學(xué)生生活及思想有關(guān)的話題。因此,平時(shí)要多關(guān)注社會(huì)生活,對(duì)自己的學(xué)習(xí)、生活多做思考,保持積極、健康、向上的人生觀、世界觀和價(jià)值觀,這樣寫出來的文章會(huì)獲取高分。
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