2008年12月英語六級考試寫作中的詞匯升級

　　在改寫完成之后，整篇文章的最后形狀是這樣的：

　　Should One Expect a Reward When Doing a Good Deed?

　　Currently, the issue that should man look forward to being rewarded when conducting a good deed is being drastically debated in public.

　　Some people defend that it deserves to be rewarded after a good deed has been done in that they believe that contemporary society has increasingly converted to “money worship” community. Now that expending time, dedicating effort, or even consuming money in doing good deeds, correspondently, it is appropriate to acquire rewards.

　　In spite of above-mentioned statements, the majority still consent that it is dispensable to reward people of doing good. Take Mr. Leifeng as an example, he spent his whole frugal life in aiding and assisting others without any return. Up to the present, people commemorate him in every 5th March. He declined rewards and awards but achieved regards and respects. Therefore, doing good deeds should be based on one’s beautiful mind, which is a sort of virtue out of self-consciousness. Meanwhile, doing good deeds incarnates man’s social liabilities and obligations.

　　Weighing the pros and cons, I am inclined to approve the latter viewpoint. Although reward accepting can hardly be accounted for a blunder, I still deem that doing good deeds without reward should be consistently a favorable custom in the country. I hold this truth as self-evident that ask not what others do for you, ask what you do for others.

　　文章進行詞匯升級之前，最多在考官的面前能夠拿到9分，但是經(jīng)過細致的升級和改革之后，本文在實際考試中的打分至少可以得到14分。當然文章可以做得更好，但是需要的是大家能夠脫離既定的模版進行寫作，否則進行無數(shù)次的詞匯升級，哪怕是把單詞上升到GRE考試的高度上，寫出來的文章也不能做到有血有肉。在這樣一個寫作模版流行的時代，我更希望同學們能夠記住一個我自己創(chuàng)造的單詞：demodelization。我解釋的意思就是去模版化。模版不能說沒有用，它在我們考試的時候幫助我們節(jié)省了寶貴的時間去思考文章的核心，只要往里面進行拼湊就可以了�？墒菂s喪失了達到作文考察的根本目的：對于已經(jīng)獲取知識的合理運用。因此我們在寫作文的時候，第一個考慮的就是將自己所寫的文章進行詞匯的但方面升級，另外一點就是應(yīng)該讓自己的文章盡量脫離模版來完成。模版不是萬能，單詞也不是萬能，合理的利用所學知識才是永遠的萬能。

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