2009年6月英語(yǔ)六級(jí)考前熱點(diǎn)高分范文(四)

　　Directions: For this part, you are allowed 30 minutes to write a composition on the topic Reserving a Seat. You should write at least 150 words, and base your composition on the outline (given in Chinese) below:

　　1)很多大學(xué)里“占座”現(xiàn)象十分普遍

　　2)這種現(xiàn)象會(huì)帶來(lái)哪些影響

　　3)你對(duì)此的看法

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　　行文思路

　　本題屬于提綱式文字命題。提綱第1點(diǎn)指出一種現(xiàn)象，提綱第2點(diǎn)要求分析該現(xiàn)象帶來(lái)的影響，提綱第3點(diǎn)要求談?wù)劇拔摇睂?duì)該現(xiàn)象的看法。

　　根據(jù)所給提綱，本文應(yīng)包含如下內(nèi)容：描述大學(xué)生在教室和圖書館“占座”的現(xiàn)象;闡述這種現(xiàn)象帶來(lái)的不良影響;談?wù)劇拔摇睂?duì)“占座”現(xiàn)象的看法。

　　高分范文

　　Reserving a Seat

　　We often see there is a table-cloth, a book or something else on the desk in the classroom or library, [1]indicating the seat is taken. This kind of phenomenon is very usual in almost all colleges and universities. [2]Strangely enough, most of students seem to [3]take this for granted, and few will protest it.

　　[4]Though most of students’ taking seats in advance is for the purpose of better study, this kind of phenomenon has great negative effects. [5]On the one hand, it is a selfish behavior, which damages other students’ interests. [6]Even if many students come to the classroom very early, they can not find a seat. [5]On the other hand, reserving a seat [7]violates the rule of fairness. [8]No matter how late you come to class, the seat is still reserved for you [6]even though many others are eager for that seat.

　　[9]Considering the above-mentioned, I think, [10]it is high time that we college students took a good look of our behavior. [5]Indeed, only if all of us can improve our consciousness, it is not a difficult task for us to get rid of this kind of phenomenon “reserving a seat”.

　　【亮點(diǎn)點(diǎn)評(píng)】

　　[1]“表示”，現(xiàn)在分詞短語(yǔ)作伴隨狀語(yǔ)。

　　[2]“非常奇怪的是”，副詞使用恰當(dāng)。

　　[3]“認(rèn)為…理所當(dāng)然”。

　　[4]though引導(dǎo)讓步狀語(yǔ)從句，引出對(duì)不良影響的闡述。

　　[5]過(guò)渡銜接詞語(yǔ)，使文章條理清晰、銜接緊密。