◇第二段思路點評:
主要論述金融危機給大學(xué)生帶來影響。
◇語言點提示:
(1)slump 經(jīng)濟蕭條、不景氣、經(jīng)濟衰退
(2)internships 實習(xí)
(3)fall victim to 被降服、屈服于
(4)malicious惡毒的、惡意的
◇第三段思路點評:
闡述大學(xué)生如何應(yīng)對金融危機的影響。
◇語言點提示:
注意since, therefore, furthermore等關(guān)聯(lián)詞的使用,使句間關(guān)系更加緊密。
沖刺作文寫作綱要:七類段落
1. 記敘一件事 When and where who did what?
A few days ago, I bought an English-Chinese dictionary at Xinhua bookstore in the downtown area of Xinjiekou. When I went back to look up some new words in the dictionary, I found pages 101 to 150 were missing. So on that afternoon, I returned to the bookstore where I had purchased it and filed a complaint directly to the general manager about the problem.
一次活動的安排,旅游的行程都可以套用記敘文模式,注意時間的推進,可用明確的時間幾點幾分,也可用大致的時間如early in the morning/at noon/in the afternoon/evening/at night, 還可用First…Then…At last…如果是發(fā)生過的事,一定要用一般過去時,如果是活動安排,須用將來時。
2. 描述一個社會現(xiàn)象,如不誠實、盜版、校園浪費等等,要充分利用例證
Dishonesty has been prevalent in our society in recent years. For example, many students cheat to obtain high scores on various exams such as CET for Band 4 or 6. Or businesses and companies produce fake goods or products of inferior quality to reap illegal profits. What is worse, some government officials and corporate leaders are involved in criminal cases of bribery and corruption, abusing the power in their hands. The flood of dishonest phenomena has brought about a harmful effect on our society.
將例子說清楚,盡量用完整句。
3. 分析現(xiàn)象的成因,至少要列出兩個方面的原因:學(xué)生選擇任課老師時所考慮的因素、住房產(chǎn)權(quán)變化的原因、國人喜歡過西方節(jié)日的原因,可用列舉法。另外,后果或影響類的段落可用同樣的方式處理。
The popularity of Western festivals in China may be attributed to several factors. On one hand, with China’s opening up to the outside world, many people, young people in particular, have been exposed to foreign cultures, an important part of which are holidays and festivals. On the other hand, business people take advantage of the occasion of celebrating western festivals to promote sales of their products to make much more money than usual. A case in point is Christmas shopping every year.
There are several factors/reasons for …First of all(For one thing)…Secondly(For another)…Lastly(In addition)
4. 提出解決問題的方案,要注意照顧到問題所涉及的方方面面:應(yīng)該怎么做?
To make good food and water supplies even better, the Government needs to tighten its regulatory standards, stiffen its inspection program and strengthen its enforcement policies. The food industry should modify some long accepted practices or turn to less hazardous alternatives. Perhaps most important, consumers will have to do a better job of learning how to handle and cook food properly. The problems that need to be tackled exist all along the food supply chain, from fields to processing plants to kitchens.
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