2010年6月英語六級寫作最后補充：高分佳句

　　1 負(fù)面現(xiàn)象，一般寫帶來的危害，產(chǎn)生的原因

　　Undoubtedly，It will have /exert a / produce considerable/profound / beneficial/ favorable/ undesirable/ negative influence/ effect on… what is more worrisome is that…

　　1)It may cause /produce /bring about considerable/drastic/ sweeping change/ rise in…

　　2)This will entail /bring /involve some dreadful/serious/pernicious(很有害的，惡性的) consequences

　　3)Just think/ imagine that /what would happen if…(想一下，如果人人做好事都想回報社會會變成什么)

　　5) he majority of people would agree that sth has caused serious problems.

　　6) Personally, it is my belief that sth threatens to do more harm than good.

　　7)if allowed to proceed unchecked, the problem will undoubtedly …(帶來的一個具體問題)

　　8)(一些過渡句，正面，反面，原因都可以使用)

　　9) on the surface of it, this may seem to be ridiculous/ attractive/ funny/ just a popular phenomenon, but If thinking again, we would point out some drawbacks/ strong points/reasons.

　　10) it is superficially plausible/ ridiculous/ attractive/ funny/just a popular phenomenon, but when subjected to analysis ,it turns out that (but a close inspection of the idea would reveal that )it will cause many problems/ result in many advantages/ has its fundamental reasons.

　　11) (一般用于說缺點) it is true that (好處) internet has the power to educate and to entertain, but unfortunately, these benefits are outweighed by the harm it does to dedicated /addicted users.

　　用來總結(jié)：

　　A If no measures are taken to ensure(要具體的寫內(nèi)容)…, a … disaster may not be far away and the next victim will probably be man himself.

　　B if we let this situation continues as it is, we do not know what will happen between people’s relationship in the future.

　　2 正面現(xiàn)象，一般寫帶來的好處，原因分析或舉例說明

　　A admittedly, as the reflection of the outlook of the people, sth, as priceless spiritual treasure ought to be preserved and cherished. At the same time there are positive reasons to advocate sth .

　　3 舉例段

　　A examples to prove the view are abundant. The most persuasive one is the case of sb who ;

　　B this can be illustrated by the example of sb who

　　C numerous examples can demonstrate the power of sth (cooperation / confidence) .a case in point is that(concerning sth )

　　D such stimulating/ less impressive cases /stories are not rare in our daily life.

　　E to examine this , let’s return to the example of sb/sth

　　1 解決問題段：

　　A (壞東西) Therefore, it is high time that effective measures must be taken to solve the problem. The essential solution, in my opinion, is to …. In addition /apart from this, people’s awareness must be heightened through education and publicity. In a word, we can never solve the problem until all of us take action to regulate people’s behaviors.

　　B (壞東西) therefore, it is imperative for us, people in all walks, to take drastic measures to reverse this disturbing trend illustrated in the picture above. For on thing, we should appeal to the authorities to make strict laws to control… for another, we should cultivate the awareness that sth is of great significance to us. Only in this way , can we (要寫的很具體，不要寫結(jié)局問題，過上幸福生活)(one measure would be to… more importantly/meanwhile/, )

　　I believe that we humans can surmount this difficulty and we will have a brilliant future.

　　C (好東西可以提倡保護) what should be done to promote (好事情 the communication between people in the present-day society)? Chinese citizens are excepted to enhance their awareness that sth is an indispensable part for sth (the construction of harmonious society). The local and central authorities, not only Chinese but also foreign ones, in coordination with the press, are obliged to … , only through these action can the culture between nations have a glorious future.

　　D(好東西) accordingly, it is vital for us to derive positive implication from these thought –provoking drawings.

　　E (壞東西) if we donot desire/hope the trend to become a reality one day in the future, positive steps must be taken to put an end to sth right now.

　　F(好壞都行) in order to make… we still have tremendous tasks to accomplish.

　　G (好壞)to improve/put an end to the positive/negative situation of , my suggestion are the following steps.

　　H(壞)there is, as a matter of fact, little doubt that immediate action is required to eliminate

　　I(好壞) we can say this and we can say that, but the most important thing is not to say, but instead to do.

　　J(壞) having recognized the problem, it follows that we must develop a plan of action.