最后一段要強(qiáng)調(diào)解決問題,談的兩點(diǎn)建議通常是提高人們的意識(shí),加強(qiáng)執(zhí)法
第三段六個(gè)句子, 第一個(gè)句子是下個(gè)結(jié)論,談解決問題的必要性.第二個(gè)句子是第一個(gè)建議談的是加強(qiáng)立法懲治這個(gè)現(xiàn)象,第三個(gè)句子談提高人們的覺悟關(guān)于著這個(gè)現(xiàn)象能提高人們對(duì)這個(gè)現(xiàn)象的覺悟.第四個(gè)句子談個(gè)諺語,談一下實(shí)踐我的建議的重要性.五個(gè)句子談解決的任重道遠(yuǎn).第六個(gè)句子是解決問題之后的美好的未來。
(1)From what have been discussed above, it is therefore, necessary that some effective measures are taken to prevent主題. (2)On the one hand, we should be sensible to strengthen the enforcement of the laws to protect something. (3)On the other hand, it is demanding for us to keep people aware of the importance of saving somebody out of the evil hands of destruction. (4)However, it is easier said than done. (5)Although the fight against it is long-standing and tremendous one,our efforts will eventually pay off.(6) Only when you attention to it can you see a colorful and harmonious future better sooner or later.
2.積極有利型的文章 文章以團(tuán)隊(duì)精神為例子
第一段談的是三個(gè)句子,第一,二個(gè)句子都是在描述圖畫,第三句子這個(gè)現(xiàn)象對(duì)社會(huì)發(fā)展的積極的現(xiàn)象,第四個(gè)句子是圖畫簡單,寓意深刻.
(1)As is vividly depicted in the picture,(描述圖畫).(2) The most striking feature is(圖畫重點(diǎn)信息).(3)There is no doubt that its symbolic meaning subtly conveyed should be given deep consideration.
第二個(gè)段子,第一個(gè)句子談一個(gè)十二個(gè)單詞的爆發(fā)力的主題句,第二個(gè)句子談這個(gè)現(xiàn)象的永恒的社會(huì)含義,用一個(gè)三十五個(gè)單詞的鉆石級(jí)的排比句子,談只要有這個(gè)現(xiàn)象就可以讓我們不斷有意義的事情,征服挑戰(zhàn)和競爭,并最后走向成功.第三個(gè)可以從反面談如果沒有這個(gè)積極現(xiàn)象,人們生活就憂悶,有挫折感,無前進(jìn)動(dòng)力,前途渺茫.第四個(gè)句子談?dòng)袃蓚(gè)大的好處.第五個(gè)句子談第一個(gè)好處,通常是讓生活豐富,有效率.再談第二個(gè)好處通常是談一些個(gè)人發(fā)展或社會(huì)進(jìn)步的好處.第五個(gè)句子是代替for example的五星級(jí)的句子.第六個(gè)是具體的舉例子,談根據(jù)一項(xiàng)調(diào)查表明,80%的人只要利用這個(gè)積極的現(xiàn)象就容易改變?nèi)松?提高素質(zhì).也可以單獨(dú)舉個(gè)性例子,第七個(gè)句子是倒裝句子談只有這個(gè)現(xiàn)象才能讓我們成為社會(huì)的成功者
(1)As is symbolically revealed in the set of drawings, the fact that(重復(fù)上面的圖畫信息) profoundly indicates that team work is momentous (重要的) and fundamental to any one who undertakes great deeds. (2)Undoubtedly, it is team work that keeps us continually doing something valuable and admirable in spite of difficulty, that makes us still full of energy to face the coming challenges and competition and that offers us the foundation for the coming success. (3)If we don not cooperate sincerely, we will live a dull and depressing life and feel frustrated and humiliated or feel loss of hope about the future. (4)As far as I am concerned, there are several advantages that can be given as below. To begin with, nothing is more beneficial than team work to overcome our defects and improve our efficiency. (5)Secondly, no issue is as good as team work to make our life more colorful and energetic.(6)No better illustration of this idea can be thought than the example mentioned below. (7)A person who is assigned various jobs along the production lines will make a mess just because no one can be proficient in all the things. (8)Only by cooperating with other people can you put your capacities into full play and can you be the winner in the society.
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