2007年江西中考英語滿分作文

　　中學(xué)生學(xué)習(xí)時間長、壓力大，專家建議學(xué)生每天課后應(yīng)采取適當(dāng)?shù)姆绞椒潘勺约�。某英文報“學(xué)生習(xí)作”專欄正在就“學(xué)生適當(dāng)?shù)姆潘煞绞健边@一話題進(jìn)行征文。假設(shè)你是二十二中初三(3)班的班長，最近你對班上同學(xué)課后放松方式進(jìn)行了調(diào)查。請根據(jù)表格提供的調(diào)查信息和要求寫一篇短文向該報投稿。

　　對 象： 二十二中初三(3)班

　　人 數(shù)：60人(男：31人;女：29人)

　　常用放松方式：

　　1.看電視(30人)

　　2.玩電腦游戲(12人)

　　3.聽音樂(8人)

　　4.進(jìn)行體育鍛煉(5人)

　　5.沒有時間放松(5人)

　　你的觀點 哪一種(些)放松方式是適當(dāng)?shù)?

　　為什么?

　　注意：

　　1.短文包括對調(diào)查相關(guān)信息的介紹和你自己的觀點;

　　2.詞數(shù)：80-100。題目和開頭已為你寫好，不記入總詞數(shù)。

　　The Proper Way(s) for Students to Relax

　　I am the monitor of Class3,Grade 3,No.22 Middle School. Recently I have made a survey of the students in my class on ways to relax after class. __________________

　　滿分作文

　　The Proper Way(s) for students to Relax

　　I am the monitor of Class 3, Grade 3, No. 22 Middle School. Recently I have made a survey of the students in my class on ways to relax after class.

　　There are 60 students in my class (31 boys and 29 girls).Different students have different ways to relax. Half of the students often watch TV. 12 students like to play computer games while 8 enjoy listening to music.5 students think doing sports is a good way and another five are too busy to relax.

　　As we study long hours every day and suffer from too much pressure, every student should choose proper ways to relax. In my opinion, watching TV or playing computer games is not a proper way to help us relax. I thing taking exercise is a proper way because it can rest our brains and eyes. Besides, it can help improve our health. Therefore, I often play pingpang.

　　點評：第一段和第二段是敘述表格中的信息，第三段是表達(dá)自己的觀點。在敘述信息時，作者使用了簡潔地語言把意思準(zhǔn)確地傳達(dá)出來;在抒發(fā)自己的觀點時候，作者詳細(xì)地闡明了自己的觀點。詳略得當(dāng)，銜接自然，結(jié)構(gòu)緊湊，不愧為一篇佳作。