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下面的英語(yǔ)句子都是出自朗文國(guó)際三冊(cè)和四冊(cè)的學(xué)生作文, 不是病句就是錯(cuò)句. 讓我們用銳利的眼睛, 一起來(lái)找茬吧.
1. We have computer class one week a time.
2. Go into my school, you can see many flowers.
3. There have 100 books.
4. I study there very happy.
5. I usually swimming there.
6. I forget said this, our school wall beside has many trees.
7. Several hours after, he was surprised.
8. He had to asked the other one.
9. He thought he speak well.
10. Mr. Li is come from Beijing .
11. He was very hardly. He likes studying Chinese.
12. This film is very good-looking .
13. It is very good to family look.
14. I think we can’t live Internet.
15. People use the net to send the mails has the most people.
16. I have a future dream.
17. It can help me to walk on my life road.
18. I think everything must be change a lot.
19. I just wonder what does my future like and what should I do.
20. But I singing not very well.
21. Tom’s mum didn’t care him.
22. Almost students use the computer not study.
23. Send mail is most of people like to do in the net.
24. When I was very small.
怎么樣,找出錯(cuò)誤沒(méi)有啊. 下面我們來(lái)看看要怎么改正吧.
1. I have computer class once a week.
英語(yǔ)中表達(dá)頻率次數(shù)時(shí):一次 once, 兩次 twice 從三次開(kāi)始用 three times ...
2. Going into my school, you can see many flowers.
這里使用動(dòng)名詞going做主語(yǔ), go 這個(gè)動(dòng)作由后面的you 發(fā)出.
3. There are 100 books.
表示某個(gè)地方有什么,一般使用There be 的存在句型.
4. I study there very happily.
Study 是個(gè)動(dòng)詞,表示動(dòng)作的程度要使用副詞,不可以用形容詞happy.
5. I usually swim there.
-ing結(jié)尾的動(dòng)名詞不可以單獨(dú)做句子的謂語(yǔ).
6. I forget said this, our school wall beside has many trees.
這個(gè)句子的表達(dá)和語(yǔ)法上都有問(wèn)題. 如果單從中文意思來(lái)看,大家都明白他在說(shuō)什么,但是要是讓外教來(lái)批改,估計(jì)他會(huì)無(wú)盡的苦惱了.所以我們?cè)诓皇Ь渥釉獾幕A(chǔ)上,使用正確的語(yǔ)法.該句子的表達(dá)應(yīng)該為:
By the way, there are many flowers beside our school wall.
