下面的英語(yǔ)句子不是病句就是錯(cuò)句，卻常在學(xué)生的作文中出現(xiàn)。 讓我們用銳利的眼睛， 一起來(lái)找茬吧。
1. We have computer class one week a time.
2. Go into my school， you can see many flowers.
3. There have 100 books.
4. I study there very happy.
5. I usually swimming there.
6. I forget said this， our school wall beside has many trees.
7. Several hours after， he was surprised.examda
8. He had to asked the other one.
9. He thought he speak well.
10. Mr. Li is come from Beijing .
11. He was very hardly. He likes studying Chinese.
12. This film is very good-looking .
13. It is very good to family look.
14. I think we can‘t live Internet.
15. People use the net to send the mails has the most people.
16. I have a future dream.
17. It can help me to walk on my life road.
18. I think everything must be change a lot.examda
19. I just wonder what does my future like and what should I do.
20. But I singing not very well.
21. Tom‘s mum didn’t care him.
22. Almost students use the computer not study.
23. Send mail is most of people like to do in the net.
24. When I was very small.
怎么樣，找出錯(cuò)誤沒(méi)有啊。 下面我們來(lái)看看要怎么改正吧。
1. I have computer class once a week.
英語(yǔ)中表達(dá)頻率次數(shù)時(shí)：一次 once， 兩次 twice 從三次開(kāi)始用 three times ……
2. Going into my school， you can see many flowers.
這里使用動(dòng)名詞going做主語(yǔ)， go 這個(gè)動(dòng)作由后面的you 發(fā)出。
3. There are 100 books.
表示某個(gè)地方有什么，一般使用There be 的存在句型。
4. I study there very happily.
Study 是個(gè)動(dòng)詞，表示動(dòng)作的程度要使用副詞，不可以用形容詞happy.
5. I usually swim there.
-ing結(jié)尾的動(dòng)名詞不可以單獨(dú)做句子的謂語(yǔ)。
6. I forget said this， our school wall beside has many trees.
這個(gè)句子的表達(dá)和語(yǔ)法上都有問(wèn)題。 如果單從中文意思來(lái)看，大家都明白他在說(shuō)什么，但是要是讓外教來(lái)批改，估計(jì)他會(huì)無(wú)盡的苦惱了。所以我們?cè)诓皇Ь渥釉獾幕A(chǔ)上，使用正確的語(yǔ)法。該句子的表達(dá)應(yīng)該為：
By the way， there are many flowers beside our school wall.
7. Several hours later， he was surprised.
使用after時(shí)，不能放在時(shí)間表達(dá)語(yǔ)的后面。
8. He had to ask the other one.
“Have to do something” 是固定用法 ，不定式后用動(dòng)詞原形。
9. He thought he spoke well.
這個(gè)句子屬于語(yǔ)法時(shí)態(tài)的不一致。
10. Mr. Li is from Beijing .
一個(gè)英語(yǔ)句子中不能有兩個(gè)謂語(yǔ)動(dòng)詞……
11. He studies very hard…… He likes studying Chinese.
首先要區(qū)分hard 和 hardly.雖然兩個(gè)都可以做副詞，但在意思上有很大的區(qū)別。 He works very hard. 他工作很努力 He hardly works. 他幾乎不工作。這個(gè)兩個(gè)表達(dá)相差很大。 其次，be 動(dòng)詞后面不能使用副詞。
12. This film is very interesting.
這是一個(gè)完全中文式的英語(yǔ)句子。 good-looking 一般用來(lái)形容人物的。
13. It is fit for family to enjoy.
又是一個(gè)中文式的句子，
14. I think we can‘t live Internet.
學(xué)生想要表達(dá)的是不要過(guò)分依賴(lài)因特網(wǎng)。不改變?cè)獾幕A(chǔ)上，我們修改為：
I think we can‘t rely on Internet.
15. Most people use the net to send the mails.
這是一個(gè)要表達(dá)比例的英語(yǔ)句子。學(xué)生在這里做了一個(gè)中文句子的“強(qiáng)行”翻譯。
16. I have a dream about future……
Future 在這里不可以直接修飾dream.examda
17. It can help me to walk on my life ‘s journey.
“人生路”中的“路”是抽象的含義，不可用“road”來(lái)表達(dá)。
18. I think everything keeps on changing.
不細(xì)心看這個(gè)句子，我完全不了解他想表達(dá)什么。但從上下文來(lái)推測(cè)，我想他想表達(dá)世事在變化的意思。
19. I just wonder what my future likes and what I should do.
賓語(yǔ)從句要使用正常語(yǔ)序。
20. But I don‘t sing very well.
動(dòng)名詞不可以單獨(dú)做謂語(yǔ)動(dòng)詞使用……一般現(xiàn)在時(shí)的句子表否定，如果是實(shí)意動(dòng)詞需要有do來(lái)幫忙。
21. Tom‘s mum didn’t care about him.
Care 是個(gè)不及物的動(dòng)詞，不可以直接加賓語(yǔ)。
22. Almost of the students use the computer not to study.
一個(gè)句子中間只能有一個(gè)謂語(yǔ)動(dòng)詞。
23. Send mail is most of people like to do in the net.
這是一個(gè)中文式表達(dá)的句子，按照上下文來(lái)看，我們修改為：
Most of people like sending mail in the internet.
24. When I was a little child.
Small 用來(lái)形容人的體型和物品體積。這里要表達(dá)的“小孩子”的意思。
從學(xué)生在作文中寫(xiě)的英語(yǔ)病句，錯(cuò)句來(lái)看，很多時(shí)候都用中文的思維來(lái)寫(xiě)英語(yǔ)句子。針對(duì)這種情況，我們建議學(xué)生要多看文章，看地道的英語(yǔ)文章，同時(shí)多多儲(chǔ)備優(yōu)美的英語(yǔ)表達(dá)句子，這樣才能做到拿起筆時(shí)，心中有數(shù)，肚里有貨，才不會(huì)生硬翻譯句子而弄出笑話(huà)了。
