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英語寫作是學(xué)生學(xué)習(xí)的一個(gè)盲點(diǎn)，缺乏對(duì)寫作的專門訓(xùn)練和反思，老師的工作量大，造成作文講評(píng)大多數(shù)時(shí)候只談現(xiàn)象，因此學(xué)生學(xué)得也不具體、不深入，忽略寫作技能的提高，甚至誤認(rèn)為只要句子結(jié)構(gòu)正確，無單詞拼寫錯(cuò)誤就應(yīng)該得滿分。同學(xué)們應(yīng)該走出對(duì)英語寫作認(rèn)識(shí)上的誤區(qū)。那么怎樣才能寫出一篇優(yōu)秀作文，而在中考中獲取高分呢？
一、寫作訣竅
總體把握，要點(diǎn)齊全；人稱時(shí)態(tài)，邏輯清楚；
關(guān)鍵詞匯，動(dòng)詞第一；組詞成句，結(jié)構(gòu)完整；
組句成文，連詞增色；此路不通，繞道迂回；
字跡工整，留好印象；從句適量，高分有望。
二、寫作步驟
1. 認(rèn)真審題。審題包括要點(diǎn)、格式、詞數(shù)以及此篇文章要傳遞給讀者什么樣的信息，告誡讀者什么(即寫作目的)。
2. 確定文體和時(shí)態(tài)。確定文體后，根據(jù)不同文體的特點(diǎn)和要求進(jìn)行組織材料；同時(shí)確定出該篇文章的總時(shí)態(tài)與時(shí)態(tài)的變化。
3. 寫完要點(diǎn)，但不隨意發(fā)揮。
4. 先草稿，后抄寫。
三、習(xí)作點(diǎn)評(píng)
Choose one of your hobbies and write an article for the school magazine about it. tell the magazine readers.
﹒what exactly your hobby is;
﹒when and how you became interested in this hobby;
﹒why you enjoy your hobby;
﹒about your hopes and plans for the future.
寫作要求：
2. 條理清楚，語句通順，書寫清晰、規(guī)范。
3. 詞數(shù)60-80。
[學(xué)生習(xí)作a]
My hobby is read books. when i was seven years old .
I became interested in reading books. I like needing books
Because there are a lot of useful things in books. I can learn
a lot of knowledge from books. Books also can teach me
how to be a good person . Books even can solve many
problems for me . I will read more good books to improve
myself.
�、俑臑閞eading books，動(dòng)詞作表語時(shí)應(yīng)該用動(dòng)名詞。
�、赼lso的位置應(yīng)放在can之后。
[點(diǎn)評(píng)]：檔次9-11分。
�、僖c(diǎn)不全，漏掉最后一個(gè)要點(diǎn)。
�、诰渥踊緹o誤，能正確傳遞信息給讀者但文章不流暢，句子與句子之間過渡不自然，給讀者感覺在回答上述① ② ③問題。
�、塾猩倭垮e(cuò)誤。
[學(xué)生習(xí)作b]
My hobby is reading .reading books is very enjoyable .
When I was young, my mother used to tell me a story before
I went to bed every night .the stories were so interesting
that I always felt they weren’t enough . So I began to read
books by myself .little by little I became interested in
reading . I can learn much knowledge and many interesting
things all over the world .when I read books , I can enjoy the
beautiful sentences . At the same time I can improve my
writing . I want to be a writer in the future, so I must study
hard and read more books so that my dream can come true .
�、匍_門見山、點(diǎn)題。
�、谡媲榱髀叮碛沙浞�。
③文中帶圈的連詞使用得恰當(dāng)，使文章過渡自然、
�、芮擅钍褂镁湫鸵员頉Q心。
[點(diǎn)評(píng)]：檔次13-14分。
①清楚表達(dá)寫作目的，要點(diǎn)齊全。
�、谡Z言表達(dá)靈活多樣，字里行間流露出真情實(shí)感，文章有感染力。
�、矍‘�(dāng)使用連詞和從句，語言流暢，且無錯(cuò)誤，是一篇高質(zhì)量的作文。
[高分突破]
①文體：記敘文。
�、谝c(diǎn)：what → when →how → why → hope and plan for the future。
�、蹠r(shí)態(tài)：一般現(xiàn)在時(shí)，一般過去時(shí)，一般將來時(shí)的自然變化。
四、培養(yǎng)途徑
1. 根據(jù)老師布置的寫作內(nèi)容，獨(dú)立完成一篇寫作。
2. 與同伴合作，交流自己的寫作，通過交流找出各自作文中寫得好的地方和優(yōu)美的句子，合作創(chuàng)造一篇新的文章，供大家欣賞。
3. 找老師點(diǎn)評(píng)，請(qǐng)求老師指點(diǎn)，尤其是怎樣潤(rùn)色。
4. 自己，寫下反思。
五、備考演練
a
縉云山是重慶著名的游覽勝地，每天有大量的游客。請(qǐng)你根據(jù)下面提供的信息寫一篇報(bào)道，說明現(xiàn)在的游客在環(huán)境保護(hù)方面的變化。
寫作要求：
1. 詞數(shù)在100左右。
2. 條理清楚，語句通順。
3. 開頭已寫好，但不計(jì)入總詞數(shù)。
Jinyun mountain is a famous place of interest …
b
閱讀電視廣告詞：“if we don’t save water ， the last drop of water will be a tear-drop.”根據(jù)提示，寫一篇60-80詞的短文。
提示：
1. 生活離不開水。
2. 可飲用水在減少。
3. 水污染嚴(yán)重。
4. 應(yīng)保護(hù)水源，再利用水。
a. [思路點(diǎn)撥]：
�、傥捏w：記敘文。
�、跁r(shí)態(tài)：一般過去時(shí)態(tài)，一般現(xiàn)在時(shí)態(tài)。采用正反對(duì)比的寫作手法，增加感染力。
�、蹖懽髂康模焊嬖V讀者保護(hù)環(huán)境的重要性。
Jinyun mountain is a famous place of interest. Every day a lot of tourists come here to enjoy its beauty. but a few years ago，some of them paid no attention to protecting the environment. they threw their rubbish，such as plastic bags，fruit skins and waste paper on the ground. sometimes they broke trees，picked flowers and killed birds. Some even made fires in the woods to cook food. How dangerous it was. luckily， great changes have taken place here. tourists are used to putting their rubbish into dustbins， and they are doing their best to protect the birds and plants as well. They bring their own meals instead of cooking to prevent starting a forest fire in the mountains. All these changes make us very happy.
b. [思路點(diǎn)撥]：
�、賷A敘夾議(說明現(xiàn)狀，談?wù)劯邢?。
②時(shí)態(tài)：一般現(xiàn)在時(shí)態(tài)。
�、蹚V告詞的含義——水很重要，應(yīng)保護(hù)和再利用(寫作意圖)。
Water is very important to humans. we can’t live without water. The water we can drink is falling. but some people don’t seem to care about it. They waste a lot of water. They pour dirty water into rivers and lakes. Water pollution is getting more and more serious. So we must do something to stop the pollution. We not only protect the water but also find ways to reuse it. if we don’t do this， the last drop of water will be a tear-drop.
