大學(xué)英語四級考試寫作高分突破專項(xiàng)訓(xùn)練(五)

　　第五節(jié)命題作文

　　命題作文要求就所給的作文題目進(jìn)行寫作。與其他作文相比，命題作文具有較大的自主性。因?yàn)橥瑯拥囊粋�題目可以從不同的角度、用不同的文體來進(jìn)行寫作。例如“My Teacher”這個題目可以寫成一篇記敘文，也可以寫成一篇描寫文。不管用什么文體，也不管從哪個方面來寫，只要寫出的文章切題、流暢、條理清楚、語言正確就是一篇好文章。然而，這種較大的自主性也會使考生感到困難。因?yàn)樵谟邢薜?0分鐘之內(nèi)，要形成提綱，并寫成短文并不是件易事。這就要求考生在寫命題作文時首先一定要審好題，要仔細(xì)分析題意，搞清楚題目所涉及的范圍，確定文章的中心思想，切忌跑題。再者，要選擇正確的文體。最后，要圍繞文章的中心思想，將寫作素材進(jìn)行分析、歸類并寫好寫作提綱，包括：引言句、主題句和結(jié)尾句。[例1]Fake CommoditiesMarkets all over the country are swamped with fake and poor commodities. This has harmed greatly the state�餾 interests and people�餾 health. For example, false poison made in a factory not only can�餿 kill mice, but also gives them immunity and makes them healthier.The cause of this serious situation is that some enterprises only want to get benefit. What�餾 more,some local governments, for the purpose of local protection, don�餿 investigate such activities,on the contrary, they even support them. The judicial organs don�餿 punish the offenders strictly.We hold that the whole society should pay greater attention to these illegal activities, and these illegal activities should be punished according to the law. The leaders in charge should take effective measures to stop these harmful activities. Consumers should learn to protect their own interests, and not to buy fake commodities. In this way, we can at last wipe out fake commodities and leave no room for them.作者把這個題目寫成了一篇說明文。一開始先指出了假冒偽劣產(chǎn)品的危害。接下來分析了這一情況產(chǎn)生的原因，最后呼吁全社會都來關(guān)注這個問題。[例2]Haste Makes Waste There is an old Chinese saying,“Haste makes waste.”It was true in the past, and it is still true in many cases today.Usually, if you act faster, you can reach your goals earlier. But it isn�餿 always the case. If you emphasize only on speed but ignore the quality of your work, you will get the opposite result. Suppose you are preparing for your final examination. You have so many things to do that you don�餿 have enough rest. You have to read and write continuously. The result is that your brain is less and less efficient, and the situation goes from bad to worse. All your efforts become fruitless. On the contrary, if your preparation follows a carefully worked out plan，your work will be effective. Consequently you will take part in the examination confidently.Whatever you do, please remember the saying—Haste makes waste. If you can properly understand its meaning, you’ll benefit a lot from it.

　　作者在文章的開頭通過重復(fù)作文的題目巧妙地點(diǎn)了題，接下來用具體的事例來說明這一眾所周知的道理。

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