新東方名師：“提純”大學英語四級作文范文

　　連貫性(coherence)：關聯詞是使文章段落之間相互連貫的必要條件。范文中nowadays, on one hand, on the other hand, in one’s opinion即以“啟承轉合”遞進的順序是文章條理清晰，層層展開。

　　完整性(completeness)：以設問句“So far as the present situation is concerned, is it a good or bad thing to open the university campus for tourists?”開頭，這是平時較少運用的段落寫作方式——設問法。“On one hand … …. On the other hand, … ….”是段落寫作分類列舉法的典型用法。

　　再次，提純范文“句子寫作”。

　　1. It has been shown that … …

　　類似句型：It is known to us that … …

　　It is said that … …

　　It is reported that … …

　　It is controversial that … …

　　2. “… … Tsing Hua University and Peking University and other famous universities … …�！薄�—并列句。并列句是簡單的復雜句。但其運用方法并不簡單，注意練習并接句的使用，會使句子顯的更加飽滿。

　　3. enable v. 使…能夠

　　I gave him full directions to enable him to find the house.

　　4. in that = because

　　表“因為”的連詞還有since, for, as，如：

　　The boy was absent because he was ill. = The boy was absent since he was ill.

　　此句以我們常用的人稱開頭，句式簡單，我們可以通過把since提前改變句式，如：

　　Since the boy was ill, he was absent. 句式多樣化。

　　最后，提純范文“措辭”。

　　1. attraction n. 具有吸引力的事情。

　　2. thousands and thousands 成千上萬的

　　形容“多”的表達方法：millions and millions

　　a multitude of

　　a great deal of

　　a large amount of

　　plenty of

　　many a

　　3. “some people argued that … …”中的“argue”并不是“討論，辯論”的意思，而是“認為”。

　　I argue that … …

　　I maintain that … …

　　I claim that … …

　　I insist that … … = I think that … …

　　I hold that … …

　　I assert that … …

　　I assume that … …