新東方：英語四級考試作文30天學習筆記(3)

　　第二段細節(jié)論證

　　分析原因：

　　1、Among the most convincing/ important reasons given/ cited/ offered/ identified by people for this problem/ phenomenon, one should be stressed/ emphasized/ mentioned...

　　2、One may regard/ see/ view/ think of the trend/ increase/ phenomenon as a sign of/ result of/ response to/ reaction to ...

　　3、The increase/ change/ failure/ success in ... mainly/ largely/ partly results from/ arises from is due to/ owing to/ attributable to the fact that/ several factors ...

　　Several years ago, many students were

　　enrolled in/ admitted to/ taken in/ matriculated popular major, so that the supply is superior to/ outweigh/ exceeds the demand. Many graduates are reluctant to work in the remote areas/ western provinces/ developing areas/ less developed country. Graduates without working experiences are now losing their appeal for many international cooperations, such as ...

　　國家制定法律法規(guī)

　　個人接受教育

　　III、圖表題(table, bar graph, pie chart, line graph)

　　圖表題的寫作邏輯結構：

　　Paragraph I:(1)概括描述圖表：趨勢描寫;

　　(2)具體描述圖表：必要數(shù)據(jù)支持(細節(jié)性)。

　　Paragraph II:(1)提出自己理由和觀點(本段主題句);

　　(2)細節(jié)性分論點(主要是原因，用于支持自己的觀點，至少兩點)。

　　Paragraph III:(1)預測未來和提出解決方法;

　　(2)總結全文和表達作者自己觀點。

　　【標題】Changes in People’s Diet

　　Directions: Write a three-paragraph composition to:

　　1. State the changes in people’s diet in the past five years.

　　2. Give possible reasons for the changes.

　　3. Draw your own conclusion.

　　You should quote as few figures as possible.

　　【短文】Changes in People’s Diet

　　In the past five years there have been many changes in people’s diet. Grain, as the main food of most Chinese, is now playing a less important role, while the proportion of some high-energy foods, such as milk and meat, has increased.

　　What has caused these changes? I think there are two reasons. First, people now have more money. The price of meat and milk is much higher than that of grain, so in the old days people couldn’t afford them. Now they have enough money to buy both meat and milk. Second, people nowadays pay more attention to the elements of their diet. They look for a well-balanced diet that will be good for their health.

　　In short, there have been changes in people’s diet in the past five years because of financial and health reasons, and there will be further changes in the future.