增補：虛擬語氣版：

　　Were the situation to continue, it would become uncontrollable.

　　考研第二段就是以上內(nèi)容的合理整合，加上第一句的論點

　　Simple as the picture is, its subtle connotation endeavors to convince us that due attention has to be paid to the prevalent and pervasive issue of unsafe food.

　　和最后一句的結(jié)論(威脅性總結(jié))If we let the situation go as it is, the whole market even the entire society would deteriorate and collapse.

　　中間插入3-4句論據(jù)即可，成為一個夾心式的寫法。一定不能寫太多，第二段控制在5--6句，7句沖頂。

　　版本一 論點+原因+結(jié)論(黑字是第二段首尾，幾個版本都不變，其他是根據(jù)剛才的分析加入的論據(jù))

　　Simple as the picture is, its subtle connotation endeavors to convince us that due attention has to be paid to the prevalent and pervasive issue of unsafe food. Several factors, both individual and social, could account for the negative phenomenon. On the one hand, a great number of people are only in pursuit of the maximum profit, totally ignoring the basic morality of the whole business. On the other hand, our legal system is far from perfect, which directly or indirectly provides the immoral businessmen with the chance of cheating. If we let the situation go as it is, the whole market even the entire society would deteriorate and collapse.

　　版本二：論點+現(xiàn)狀+層進+結(jié)論

　　頭尾兩句不變

　　Simple as the picture is, its subtle connotation endeavors to convince us that due attention has to be paid to the prevalent and pervasive issue of unsafe food. The past several years has witnessed/experienced the phenomenon that people in growing numbers suffered from the severe consequence of unsafe food. We can think of a variety of cheating phenomena in our contemporary society, such as the poisonous milk which results in prevalent infant kidney problem, and eggs which contain undesirable chemical factors. There is no denying the fact that the virtue of honesty should be accepted, appreciated and advocated by all the businessmen. Regrettably, the current situation is incompatible with this ideal concept. If we let the situation go as it is, the whole market even the entire society would deteriorate and collapse.(最后一句可省，因為太長了)

　　版本三：論點+后果+結(jié)論

　　Simple as the picture is, its subtle connotation endeavors to convince us that due attention has to be paid to the prevalent and pervasive issue of unsafe food. Professional dishonesty undoubtedly exerts an adverse consequence on our society. Initially, they adversely affect the health condition of numerous consumers, for the reason that consumers can not easily recognize them. Additionally, fake goods pose a probable and potential threat on our national economy, because/as consumers do not believe the market system. In other words, this phenomenon will undermine the whole business. Finally, we have business with foreign countries. If fake goods are discovered in the overseas trade, it will undoubtedly exert a negative influence on our reputation. If we let the situation go as it is, the whole market even the entire society would deteriorate and collapse.(最后一句可省，因為太長了)

　　版本四：論點+現(xiàn)狀+一點原因+一點后果+結(jié)論

　　1) Simple as the picture is, its subtle connotation endeavors to convince us that due attention has to be paid to the prevalent and pervasive issue of unsafe food. 2)We can think of a variety of cheating phenomena in our contemporary society, such as the poisonous milk and eggs, because a great number of people are only in pursuit of the maximum profit, totally turning a blind eye to the basic morality of the whole business. 3)In other words, professional dishonesty undoubtedly exerts an adverse consequence on our society. 4)If we let the situation go as it is, the whole market even the entire society would deteriorate and collapse.

　　1) 是深刻含義; 2)是現(xiàn)狀+一點原因; 3)是后果; 4)是威脅性總結(jié)

　　西部大開發(fā)

　　1. 由淺入深Simple as the picture is, the connotation behind it should be taken into consideration with more insight and penetration.

　　2. 深刻含義Undoubtedly, this picture is thought-provoking, in that it endeavors to convince us that the development of the western part has been a prevalent and pervasive issue.

　　3. 現(xiàn)狀：The past several years have witnessed the phenomenon that people in growing numbers have participated in the campaign.

　　或：The past several years have witnessed the increasing/soaring passion (enthusiasm) of people to join in the process. 補充：參與/投身于 的其他寫法 be engaged in devote oneself in

　　4. 原因：

　　1) 東西部差異大，東部很多人生活富裕，而西部一些地區(qū)仍然貧窮

　　2) 這是和諧社會共同發(fā)展的需要。

　　3)BT理由，壓力巨大。(稍微改寫下，西部壓力大就可以了)

　　這里暫且寫一條：Some people in the developed areas are leading a luxurious life while in some underdeveloped regions, a great number of people are still living in sheer poverty.

　　5. 影響

　　1)可以有效解決東西部發(fā)展不均衡的問題

　　2)極大提高西部人民的生活水平

　　3)可以提高西部人民的教育文化水平

　　一個詞：深遠!

　　The movement, directly or indirectly, will exert a far-reaching influence on the western areas even the country as a whole. It can not only alleviate (減輕緩和，不會的話換relieve) the poverty of the underdeveloped areas, but also lay a solid foundation for the education level of the region effectively and efficiently.

　　6. 層進 西部大開發(fā)應該被accepted, appreciated and advocated.

　　7. 反面論證：要是國家不注意均衡發(fā)展，只顧東部，整個國家就會。

　　Suppose our government does not pay enough attention to the west, our whole country would become unbalanced and unable to survive and thrive (in the ruthless and relentless competition)

　　或者正面總結(jié)：Generally speaking, the phenomenon would continue to exert a beneficial influence on our society, if it is widely accepted, appreciated and advocated.

　　注：本文并未采用舉例說明的論證手段

　　三分天下法：

　　Undoubtedly, the subtle connotation of the picture endeavors to convince us that the development of the western part has been a prevalent and pervasive issue. (論點)The drawing is thought-provoking, in that it contains three layers of profound meaning. (過渡句)Initially, the past several years have witnessed the phenomenon that people in growing numbers have participated in the campaign. Additionally, some people in the developed areas are leading a luxurious life while in some underdeveloped regions, a great number of people are still living in sheer poverty. Finally, the movement, directly or indirectly, will exert a far-reaching influence on the western areas even the country as a whole. Generally speaking, suppose our government does not pay enough attention to the west, our whole country would become unbalanced and unable to survive and thrive (in the ruthless and relentless competition)(結(jié)論)

　　總共6句話

　　第一句仍然直接說出深層含義(由淺入深的寫法確實是比較弱智)

　　第二句是關鍵：這是一句過渡句，提示閱卷人，我接下來要分三點來分析這個問題，自己制造這句話，可以避免模板同時還可以提示脈絡同時還可以順便湊個字數(shù)

　　例句如下：

　　1. This picture is thought-provoking in that it conveys the following three layers of subtle connotations.

　　2. The subtle implication can be analyzed in the following three interrelated aspects.

　　3. In order to derive profound implication from it, we can dissect this enlightening picture in the following three aspects.

　　以上三句話的意思無非就是：考官注意啊，我要寫三點了!

　　然后開始寫自己的1，2，3每點一句話(當然如果你可以多寫幾句也不是問題，控制時間就OK)

　　第三句是第一點，initially/to begin with/first and foremost

　　第四句是第二點，additionally/what’s more/moreover/furthermore

　　第五句是第三點，finally/last but not least

　　至于最后一句第六句，以前怎么總結(jié)，現(xiàn)在還怎么總結(jié)，注意關聯(lián)詞Generally speaking。

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