思路點(diǎn)撥
圖畫中的一只小綿羊,正呆在一塊大石頭的陰影下面。但是它樂觀、豁達(dá)地認(rèn)為,有陰影,那么就說明有陽光。這幅圖無疑向我們傳達(dá)了一種健康的人生哲學(xué):樂觀生活、達(dá)觀處世。由于這是一篇人生哲理類文章,所以文章安排可以相對(duì)自由一些:
第一段:描述圖畫;第二段:利用正反舉例論證悲觀與樂觀的差距+總結(jié)句;第三段:倡導(dǎo)一種樂觀生活、達(dá)觀處世的人生態(tài)度和人生哲學(xué)。思維拓展
本文也可以從世界觀、人生觀的角度入手。
相反,如果是一幅表明悲觀厭世的圖片,我們也可以采取同樣的手法進(jìn)行處理。
高分范文
As is apparently revealed in the cartoon above, the sheep lives happily in an optimistic state of mind, ignoring the threat of a dark shade, because he believes that where there is shadow, there is sunshine①. What is conveyed in the picture is both positive and illuminating。
As far as the purpose of the drawer is concerned, I think he intends to remind us of the importance of optimism. If the sheep in the cartoon feels anxious and pessimistic about the dark shade all day long, he can by no means have a comfortable and happy life. Examples like this are numerous, but I think the following one will be convincing enough. If there is half a cup of water, the pessimist may cry over it because they have only a half, while② the optimist may cheer for it because they still have a half. Obviously, they will have different perceptions and feelings③ toward the same life。
There is no denying that, most optimists have a high happiness index, which can hardly be experienced by pessimists. Therefore, we must read our life with a positive attitude. What’s more, the optimistic attitude can infect others strongly, meaning that we will find that all the friends around us are optimistic if we observe them in the same perspective. As a result, an atmosphere of optimism and happiness could be naturally set up. Therefore, let’s keep the famous line of Shelley, the well-known poet, in mind for ever, that is, “If winter comes, can spring be far behind?”④
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