Directions: For this part, you are allowed 30 minutes to write a short essay based on the picture below. You should focus on the impact of social networking websites on reading. You are required to write at least 150 words but no more than 200 words.(2015-12-3)
作文的字?jǐn)?shù)要求是150-200字,那么,大家盡量將字?jǐn)?shù)控制在180字左右,不要寫的過多,也不要寫的太少。解決了字?jǐn)?shù)問題,那么,漫畫作文究竟該如何寫作呢?
六級作文的話,我們按照三段論的方式進(jìn)行寫作:描述圖畫段、原因分析段、歸納總結(jié)段。首先,我們來看看第一段,描述圖畫段。具體該怎么描述呢?我們就寫三句話,“先整體描述,再細(xì)節(jié)描述,最后總結(jié)”的方式進(jìn)行。以下為作文模板。
As is vividly depicted in the simple but educational photo, 整體描述, which successfully captures our eyes. If we give it a closer watch, it is not difficult to find that 細(xì)節(jié)描述. Obviously, what the drawing has subtly conveyed should be given more concern.
在這里,同學(xué)們需要關(guān)注,怎么樣整體描述,怎么樣細(xì)節(jié)描述。教大家一個比較實用的方式,整體描述是“只看圖,不看文字”,細(xì)節(jié)描述是“既看圖又看文字”。根據(jù)漫畫描述,我們可以這樣寫:
As is vividly depicted in the simple but educational photo, a man and a woman are talking near the desk, which successfully captures our eyes.(劃線句為整體描述)If we give it a closer watch, it is not difficult to find that the man likes reading every day and his favorite book is facebook. (劃線句為細(xì)節(jié)描述)Obviously, what the drawing has subtly conveyed should be given more concern.
細(xì)心的同學(xué)會發(fā)現(xiàn),這樣的描述,即整體加細(xì)節(jié)描述,把漫畫的內(nèi)容給描述出來了,同時,也把漫畫的寓意點出來了。
第二段的寫作,即原因分析段。我們一般可以從原因分析的角度進(jìn)行闡述。同樣的,使用模板加上自己分析的原因,第二段就可以完成寫作。第二段模板如下:
The reasons for the problem are as follows. On the top of list is that 原因1. In addition, there is the other point that no one can ignore. It is universally admitted that 原因2.
在這里,我就不寫具體的原因以及參考范文了,同學(xué)們可以從一些大的方面進(jìn)行寫作,比如:經(jīng)濟(jì)原因、科技原因、文化原因、教育原因等方面去進(jìn)行思考,相信難度也不是很大。
第三段的寫作,總結(jié)歸納段。這一段寫作比較簡單,把模板背下來即可。
According to the above analysis, it is advisable for us to take steps to reverse this evil trend. Of all the steps, mass media/the awareness of the public tend to function essentially in the job. Only in this way can we resolve this problem and embrace a bright future.
第三段的劃線句,大家可以根據(jù)情況適當(dāng)調(diào)整,這樣就能順利完成作文了。漫畫作文的寫作比較簡單,只需要大家熟背模板,加上自己的寫的幾個句子即可。只要大家花些時間,相信大家一定能取得較好的分?jǐn)?shù)。
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