。2)句式
除了采用詞組,要使文章更具英語的味道,我們還需要變換句式。沒有受過正規(guī)作文訓(xùn)練的考生,通常采用的句式多為主謂賓、主系表。于是我們看到大多數(shù)的文章充斥著這樣的形式:I am a good boy, and I am a student. I study in Shandong University, and I have three years experience in Qilu Hotel.這樣流水帳式的文章顯然不能得到高分。
寫作中閱卷人喜歡的句式有以下兩種:一是插入語;二是倒裝。
第一,插入語。
所謂插入語,英語中有兩種形式。一種是有兩個逗號之間引起的成分稱之為插入語;第二種是有兩個半破折號引起的成分稱之為插入語。如下所示(黑體劃線處):
Jinan, the Spring City, is a famous tourist city.
Other people may give us instrumental support—financial aid, material resources, and needed services—that reduces stress by helping us resolve and cope with our problems.
插入語的作用主要有兩個,一個是突出主語,比如說:He, who would like to play basketball, is a good student.第二個作用是解釋說明,比如說:People, especially students, should work hard.
(3)倒裝
倒裝是我們寫作中需要用到的。雖然略顯俗套,但是卻是很能滿足閱卷人的主觀感受的。常用的倒裝形式有以下幾種:
Only + 時間狀語
Only when all of us join in the efforts of eliminating cheating at all levels can we expect to have a cleaner society and a more beautiful future.
Only + 介詞詞組
Only by planning his time care fully can he improve efficiency and make achievements.
Only in this way can we master the writing skills step by steps.
否定詞位于句首(hardly when; never; not only---,but also---; seldom) 在我一生當(dāng)中很難遇到這樣的人
Seldom in my life have I met such a kind-hearted man.
地點(diǎn)方位名詞位于句首
In no other place in the world can one find such enthusiasm for applying for hosting the 2008 Olympic Games.