英語四六級考試寫作提高：如何改寫范文

　　英語四級、英語六級寫作提高方法：

　　Should the University Campus Be Open to Tourist?

　　1. 名校校園正成為旅游新熱點(diǎn)

　　2. 校園是否應(yīng)對游客開放，人們看法不同

　　3. 我認(rèn)為…

　　Should the University Campus Be Open to Tourists?

　　Nowadays， many famous university campuses have become one of the popular tourist attractions. It has been shown on TV and on the radio that every year thousands and thousands of middle school students visit Tsing Hua University and Peking University and other famous universities in China. In the place far away from the capital city， the local students also visit the universities famous in their own province。

　　So far as the present situation is concerned， is it a good or bad thing to open the university campus for tourists? Different people have different opinions. On one hand， some people argued that it is a good thing for the students to visit the famous university campus in that it can enable the middle students to get more information about the university and they can have enough time and opportunity to prepare themselves with the chance to get into the university. On the other hand， some people hold a negative view about this phenomenon. In their opinion， the public tourism will have negative effect on the universities because it will not only do harm to the environment but also to the intellectual atmosphere。

　　In my opinion， the tourism to the universities is not a good thing. The campus is mainly a place for study. With the increasing tourism on the campus， it will ruin the spiritual atmosphere in this learning field。

　　首先，提純范文 “謀篇布局”及結(jié)構(gòu)模板。

　　第一段：提出問題或現(xiàn)象。Nowadays， … … have become one of the popular … …。 It has been shown on TV and on the radio that … …。

　　第二段：正反列舉人們的看法。So far as the present situation is concerned， is it a good or bad thing to … …? Different people have different opinions. On one hand， some people argued that it is a good thing for … … in that … …。 On the other hand， some people hold a negative view about this phenomenon. In their opinion， … … will have negative effect on … … because it will not only do harm to … … but also to … …。

　　第三段：擺明自己觀點(diǎn)。In my opinion， … … is not a good thing. … … With the increasing … …， it will ruin … …。

　　其次，提純范文“段落寫作”。

　　段落寫作分為統(tǒng)一性，連貫性和完整性三方面。

　　統(tǒng)一性(unity)：段落開頭的主題句應(yīng)該做到不可太寬泛，也不可太具體，做到有較強(qiáng)的概括性才能使下文做到有的放矢的展開。范文第二段首句以設(shè)問的方式提出一個(gè)問題is it a good or bad thing就有很強(qiáng)的概況性。下文自然會一方面從好的方面說明，另一方面從壞的方面說明。

　　連貫性(coherence)：關(guān)聯(lián)詞是使文章段落之間相互連貫的必要條件。范文中nowadays， on one hand， on the other hand， in one’s opinion即以“啟承轉(zhuǎn)合”遞進(jìn)的順序是文章條理清晰，層層展開。

　　完整性(completeness)：以設(shè)問句“So far as the present situation is concerned， is it a good or bad thing to open the university campus for tourists?”開頭，這是平時(shí)較少運(yùn)用的段落寫作方式——設(shè)問法�！癘n one hand … …。 On the other hand， … …�！笔嵌温鋵懽鞣诸惲信e法的典型用法。

　　再次，提純范文“句子寫作”。

　　1. It has been shown that … …

　　類似句型：It is known to us that … …

　　It is said that … …

　　It is reported that … …

　　It is controversial that … …

　　2. “… … Tsing Hua University and Peking University and other famous universities … …�！薄�—并列句。并列句是簡單的復(fù)雜句。但其運(yùn)用方法并不簡單，注意練習(xí)并接句的使用，會使句子顯的更加飽滿。

　　3. enable v. 使…能夠

　　I gave him full directions to enable him to find the house。

　　4. in that = because

　　表“因?yàn)椤钡倪B詞還有since， for， as，如：

　　The boy was absent because he was ill. = The boy was absent since he was ill。

　　此句以我們常用的人稱開頭，句式簡單，我們可以通過把since提前改變句式，如：

　　Since the boy was ill， he was absent. 句式多樣化。

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