主持人:我們作文題第一時(shí)間考?
江濤:對(duì)。
主持人:我聽一些朋友說江濤老師今年又命中了6月17號(hào)的作文題,不知道這一次的新題型能不能給大家一些預(yù)測(cè)性的信息呢?
江濤:是這樣,我想針對(duì)于這一次所謂四級(jí)的作文的命種的可能我想,我要解釋一下,不是命中而是在6月17號(hào)之前我們給同學(xué)大概五篇反問,一種有一篇,我們給的是學(xué)生會(huì)同志形式,在我們的要求跟實(shí)際上6月17號(hào)同學(xué)面對(duì)的作文是有很大的相似,包括文章的結(jié)構(gòu)以及場(chǎng)景包括一些關(guān)健詞。那么,我記得我們當(dāng)時(shí)的題目,是給大家的一個(gè)第五篇作文的題目是,假設(shè)你是學(xué)生會(huì)的工作人員,那么讓你寫一份通知,那么通知全校的學(xué)生,將會(huì)有一份活動(dòng)是魯迅先生單程的活動(dòng)。還有一個(gè)讓你寫有關(guān)于這一次活動(dòng)的時(shí)間,地點(diǎn)、然后業(yè)績注意事項(xiàng),那么第三段然后再總結(jié)一下別的一些注意事項(xiàng)。那么6月17號(hào)四級(jí)的作文題目,它的主題是學(xué)生會(huì)要召開一次招募活動(dòng),針對(duì)于招募活動(dòng)的時(shí)間地點(diǎn)實(shí)際上是一樣的。我的初中是什么呢,我發(fā)現(xiàn)四六級(jí)在最近幾年的考試當(dāng)中,是越來越貼近學(xué)生的生活和學(xué)習(xí)包括工作,也就越來越寫實(shí)了。包括前幾年考接到應(yīng)聘的通知,討論校園景點(diǎn)是否對(duì)外開放,這實(shí)際上都是包圍在考生生長的生活和學(xué)習(xí)當(dāng)中的。這個(gè)是我們?yōu)槭裁唇o的一篇范文,要今天要借這樣一個(gè)機(jī)會(huì),給全國的學(xué)生在作文有一些指導(dǎo)。首先第一我要提醒大家的,實(shí)際上從閱卷的角度來講,我們的很多的閱卷的老師平時(shí)我也給他們溝通過,其實(shí)現(xiàn)在已經(jīng)很厭倦這個(gè)套具了。現(xiàn)在是權(quán)均力敵的考生,想在作文的過程當(dāng)中唯一的救命稻草就是套具。萬能型作文,實(shí)際上現(xiàn)在講,雖然說閱卷老師的平分方式還是快速的評(píng)分,一分鐘、兩分鐘就評(píng)完一個(gè)作文,更多我要提醒很多考生在寫作文當(dāng)中,實(shí)際上是會(huì)容易被細(xì)節(jié)所感動(dòng),而不是一句話,某一句話第一句話寫得有多么的長,第一句話的結(jié)構(gòu)優(yōu)多么的復(fù)雜,所以說我在這個(gè)地方第一點(diǎn)提醒廣大同學(xué)的就是應(yīng)該要注意適當(dāng)?shù)淖⒁鈪f(xié)作詞匯的提升。那么剛才進(jìn)直播間我也給工作人員一份東西,現(xiàn)在可以貼到網(wǎng)上來。
作文高分詞匯
名詞:
Achievement(成就)->Secondly, young students may gain some sense of achievement through winning a game.
Amusement(娛樂)-> It brings us a lot pleasure and amusement.
Approach(途徑,方法)->Learning foreign languages offers us a great approach to discovering new cultures.
Atmosphere(大氣,氣氛,氣息)->I think that temptation of city life, especially of the cultural atmosphere in big
cities, is overwhelming, even though those unsolved troubles are still there.
Combination(結(jié)合)->As neither of the two solutions is effective enough to solve the problem of heavy traffic in cities, I favor a combination of the two.
Commodity(商品)->The commodities and service provided by society have become more diversified.
Contribution(貢獻(xiàn))->If they continue to work in a way their health permits, old people can still make a great contribution to the society.
Correlation(關(guān)系)->Previous studies have shown a correlation between violent computer games and agression.
Curiosity(好奇心)->As we know, our textbooks remain unchanged for ages while the up-to date software on various subjects is easily available anywhere, say, on the internet, thus stirring up my curiosity about more knowledge.
Depression(抑郁,消沉,蕭條)->Raising pets gives them great happiness and helps relieve their pressure and depression.
Enthusiasm(熱情)-> Enthusiasm for one's major is often a strong determinant of one's success in it.
Esteem(尊嚴(yán))->Take care, though, with whom you choose to have close relationships for they can have a tremendous impact on your self-esteem and life path.
Exploration(探索)->Despite the fact that many of my fellow students like other ways of learning, I never give up any opportunity to sit at my computer for the exploration of the ocean of knowledge.
Fault(過錯(cuò))->Parents must make clear that their divorce is no fault of their child.
Harmony(協(xié)調(diào))->We need to work hard to find a way to conduct an economy that is in harmony with the environment.
Illustration(例證)->The development of literature is a very vivid illustration.
Indulgence(沉溺)->But uncontrolled indulgence in physical recreation may lead us to the point of being strong in body but weak in brain.
Innovation(創(chuàng)新,改革)->On the contrary, their creativity and innovation should be encouraged
The innovation of air travel during this century has made the world seem smaller.
Intention(意圖)->Good intention may sometimes lead to the adverse result.
Involvement(參與)->Involvement in various kinds of activities could help make me a well rounded person.
Merit(優(yōu)點(diǎn))->Frankly speaking, people who have some ideas of it cannot deny the merit born with the system.
Obligation(義務(wù))->Some people suggest that the old people's children have the obligation to look after their old parents.
Popularization(流行,普及)->And in many cities, the popularization of private cars is viewed as an important sign of local economic growth.
Priority(優(yōu)先權(quán))-> Safety must be given the highest priority.
Prospect(前途,展望)->For the sake of our students' prospects, teachers should also be called on to respect students and add more attention to enlightening the individuality of the students.
Restriction(限制)->From my point of view, the government should not give restrictions to artists.
Shortage(缺乏)->Only steps are taken to deal with this problem immediately can we avoid a severe world-wide water shortage later on>
Sights(眼界)->Television can widen our sights.
Trait(特征)->Patience, compassion and empathy are also important traits in being a good friend or partner.
Vehicle(交通工具)->Some kinds of animals have even been used as vehicles since the primitive society.
動(dòng)詞:
Acquire(獲得)->The most important task for college students is to acquire abundant knowledge and experience, which are quite essential to their future career.
Advocate(提倡)-> There is no point advocating improved public transport unless we can pay for it.
Arouse(激起)->They bring great pleasures to young people, train them to respond quickly and arouse their interest in computer science.
Assist(幫助)->If we want to prevent a population explosion, we should take action now-or assist the poorer countries to do so.
Boost(促進(jìn))->Artistic projects, which are symbols of the city, can boost local tourism .
Claim(聲稱)->Those people who strongly oppose the practice claim that it violates people's basic rights of working.
Consume(消費(fèi),消耗)->However, going out to the cinema means taking a great deal of trouble to leave the house and consuming a lot of time.
Emerge(出現(xiàn))-> Advanced figures are emerging in multitude in this era of ours.
Exert(發(fā)揮)->Subsequently, this reasonable system will exert better function.
Facilitate(使方便,促進(jìn))->Good advertisements can help facilitate communication between business people and the public, and help keep the business world moving.
Hinder(阻礙)->Wearing uniforms, to some extent, discourages individuality and hinder the development of
creativity.
Obtain(獲得)->So as far as I am concerned, I am eager to obtain such a way of learning.
Undermine(損害,破壞)->This will eventually undermine national culture by encouraging the spread and popularization of western customs and values.
Witness(目睹,證明)->The knowledge-based society witnesses great changes over the past decades.
Wreck(毀壞,破壞)->There is, however, a risk that we will wreck the environment so effectively that the world will no longer be an attractive place to live.
形容詞:
absurd(荒謬的) It is completely absurd to suggest that we shouldn't test students.
Abundant(豐富的)->Meanwhile milk had been accepted by the masses, because of its abundant nutrition.
Affluent(豐富的,富裕的)->It is not only in affluent societies that people are obsessed with the idea of making more money.
Detrimental(有害的)->Besides, staying in front of the computer too long will be detrimental to children's health.
Diversified(多樣化)->The commodities and service provided by society have become more diversified.
Essential(本質(zhì)的,基本的,重要的)-> Such an essential daily item as water is in short supply in many parts of the world.
Evident(明顯的)->It is evident that it can relieve the traffic congestion in the streets, thus accelerating the flow of buses and cars.
Fierce(激烈的)->Nowadays, young people face fierce competition and suffer from great life pressure.
Indispensable(必不可少的)->Although it is indispensable to human beings, it also brings a lot of inconvenience to us.
Prompt(快速的)->Old people react more slowly than young people, who can always make quick judges and prompt decisions.
Sagacious(明智的)->It is sagacious that all relevant factors should be taken into account before taking any action.
Unique(獨(dú)特的)-> Compared with the large family, the small family has a unique advantage.
副詞:
Accordingly(因此)->Accordingly, they believe that more for agricultural research can lead to another green revolution.
Attentively(專注地)->I'm also looking for the ability to listen attentively and then to be able to respond to an idea that has been presented to them..
Utterly(完全地,徹底地)->We become utterly dependent on the two most primitive media of communication: picture and the spoken word.
常有短語補(bǔ)充:
1.at first glance(初看起來)->At first glance Internet offers us excitement and a world of promise.
2.Attribute…to(歸因于)->They appreciatively attribute what they eat every day, from different kinds of new
vegetables to new fish varieties, to the efforts of scientists.
3.Be obsessed with(對(duì)…著迷)->It is not only in affluent societies that people are obsessed with the idea of making more money.
4.Cater for(迎合)->The responsibility of an artist is to create artworks to cater for people's needs for aesthesis and enjoyment.
5.Coincide with(一致)->The critics argue that the practice dose not coincide with the present-day civilized world in which liberty and individuality are highly worshiped.
6.Deprive …of (剝奪)->The wealthier nations deprive their poorer neighbors of their most able citizens.
7.Give…a hand->An important aspect of traveling with friends is that in case emergency takes place, your friend will give you a hand immediately.
8.Hold water(經(jīng)得起推敲)->Reasonable and attractive as the opinion seems, it cannot hold water.
9.In the long run(從長遠(yuǎn)看)->Solving problems in the dorm will, in the long run, help students understand how to communicate with others.
10.place a very high value on.. Americans today don't place a very high value on intellect.