5. Unclear pronoun reference
All pronouns must clearly refer to definite referents [nouns].
Use it, they, this, that, these, those, and which carefully to prevent confusion.
錯(cuò)誤的使用代詞或模糊的是用代詞,是我經(jīng)常在論壇作文里面發(fā)現(xiàn)的。不是說(shuō)不可以用,但是一定要很清楚地有所指。作文的開(kāi)頭部分,我的建議是盡量不要用很多代詞,因?yàn)殚_(kāi)頭部分是整個(gè)文章的一個(gè)概覽,thesis必須clear, 不要怕麻煩,即便是多陳述一遍(不要用原句!換換說(shuō)法),也是對(duì)thesis的強(qiáng)調(diào),并不累贅。正文、結(jié)尾只要使用代詞得當(dāng)就可以了。
不要小看代詞,它對(duì)你思想的表達(dá)有的時(shí)候很關(guān)鍵,如果指代不清,其他寫(xiě)得再好讀者也會(huì)confused
Unclear pronoun reference
Einstein was a brilliant mathematician. This is how he was able to explain the universe.
改正:
Einstein, who was a brilliant mathematician, used his ability with numbers to explain the universe.
原句:
Because Senator Martin is less interested in the environment than in economic development, he sometimes neglects it.
改正
Because of his interest in economic development, Senator Martin sometimes neglects the environment.
6. Incorrect pronoun case
Determine whether the pronoun is being used as a subject, or an object, or a possessive in the sentence, and select the pronoun form to match.
比較弱的錯(cuò)法,不過(guò)你敢保證你從沒(méi)犯過(guò)?!
Incorrect pronoun case
Castro‘s communist principles inevitably led to an ideological conflict between he and President Kennedy.
改正:
Castro‘s communist principles inevitably led to an ideological conflict between him and President Kennedy.
原句:
Because strict constructionists recommend fidelity to the Constitution as written, no one objects more than them to judicial reinterpretation.
改正:
Because strict constructionists recommend fidelity to the Constitution as written, no one objects more than they [do] to judicial reinterpretation.
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