通常提綱作文都是給出三個提綱,每個提綱即是一段,正好符合四級作文“三段論”的布局。但趙文通老師在此提醒同學(xué)們需要注意的是:當(dāng)給出的提綱小于三個時,比如只給出了兩個提綱,那么其中的一個提綱就要分成兩段來寫。
寫作范文1
1.運動的積極因素
2.運動的消極因素
3.你的體會
Sports benefit us in many respects.(根據(jù)main idea 寫出topic sentence。) When taking part in sports, we get the chance to train almost all parts of our bodies. There is no doubt that proper sports activities keep our physical fitness. Furthermore, sports can enrich our life and maintain our psychological health. Through participation, everyone can learn that on the playground he not only struggles for himself but also fights for his team. Sports teach us about consideration, cooperation and optimism to failure.(關(guān)鍵詞的并列往往可以給閱卷人留下深刻的印象。)
But sports can do some harm to those who cannot plan their activities properly. Too hard training may hurt their bodies, exhaust their vigor, and even cause them to become sick.
In general, I love sports. I enjoy sports. For sports not only help me to live a well-balanced life, but also provide me with opportunities to get closer to nature. Sports add happiness to my everyday life when I perform in a decent way.(decent這個詞用得恰到好處,在這里也正是“恰到好處”的意思。)
寫作范文2
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1.廣告給人們帶來的益處
2.廣告給人們帶來的煩惱
3.如何正確利用廣告的作用
Advertisement can be a service to people. First, it is informative, and can help people buy and sell goods. Second, it can widen people's knowledge, and make people more experienced. Lastly, people can enjoy themselves through those programs which advertisements have been put into.(分條舉例說明廣告的益處。)
Some advertisements, however, are not very useful to people, sometimes even harmful. An advertisement like this, for example, may put thousands of women and girls into trouble. "Disillusioned with life, love, marriage? You need help. Phone me." And the Savior gives his phone number to his sheep.
In modern times, many advertisements are subjective rather than objective, persuasive rather than informative.(說理客觀。) The only purpose of these advertisements is to persuade people to buy their poorly made products. Therefore, it is wise for people to make sure the advertisements are telling the truth.(根據(jù)提綱中第三段的主旨來寫如何正確利用廣告。)
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