2011年12月英語四級(jí)作文范文解析之步步為營

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　　范文：

　　There is an old saying: where there is a will, there is a way. It tells us that a strong will is the most essential quality that anyone who wants to achieve success. It can contribute a lot to one’s success.

　　Although “All roads lead to Rome”, none of them is completely smooth. Our life is filled with obstacles which may make us feel so hopeless that we may choose to give up. At the crucial moment, strong will helps a lot. As a matter of fact, the ability to work through difficult situation and unfortunate events with strong will can make one stronger and more capable. In other words, if we want to realize life’s goal, we must keep forging ahead with strong consciousness.

　　From what has been discussed above, we can see that the establishment of tough determination is of great importance to everyone. With a strong will, including our knowledge, we will be able to deal with any situation in our life. Whatever we do, as long as we stick to and do not give up easily, we will realize the goal at last.

　　四級(jí)寫作體裁有三種：論說文、應(yīng)用文及圖表作文。論說文有三種：問題解決型、觀點(diǎn)對(duì)比型和現(xiàn)象描述型。本次四級(jí)考試的作文題目為" Succeeds Without a Strong Will"屬于論說文。

　　本文的整體內(nèi)容可以分為三段，中心應(yīng)該圍繞“where there is a will, there is a way”，首段可以通過“戒煙很簡單，但是不堅(jiān)持，也是不能成功的”得出“萬事都需要堅(jiān)持”，從而確定整篇文章的中心論點(diǎn)。

　　第二段主要應(yīng)聚焦于論證“意志堅(jiān)定的人才能夠完成偉大的使命”，可以通過以下幾個(gè)句子，如"Life is not all roses";"Adversity is a good discipline."等句子來論證：堅(jiān)定的意志是成功的必要階段。此段為文章的主體段落，需要在保證文章通順、邏輯清晰的基礎(chǔ)上，注重語言的精彩，可以通過復(fù)合句的使用和排比的修辭方法來達(dá)到。

　　第三段論證“學(xué)生也是這樣，不刻苦學(xué)習(xí)，終究不會(huì)成為有用之才”，此段可以將文章的中心議題和大學(xué)生的生活貼近，聯(lián)系學(xué)生自己的日常生活，從而更具現(xiàn)實(shí)性和普遍性，學(xué)生也可以從中得出“學(xué)習(xí)并非坦途，需要堅(jiān)持不懈的努力”。