【點(diǎn)評(píng)】名師點(diǎn)評(píng)6月英語四級(jí)真題視頻
2012年6月英語四級(jí)作文解析
四級(jí)寫作這次還是出得沒什么新意,還是結(jié)合生活的細(xì)節(jié)事情來命題,考“過度包裝”。其實(shí)徐可風(fēng)認(rèn)為這也怪不了命題的兄弟,畢竟四六級(jí)的命題也就是那些套路了,用多了,自然就很難再創(chuàng)新了!斑^度包裝”這種現(xiàn)象可風(fēng)倒是常?吹剑缗笥阎星锼偷脑嘛灠,那月餅盒包裝得比無比奢華,比骨灰盒還奢華。
命題還是按照“描述現(xiàn)象”“分析原因”“建議措施”這老掉牙的三板斧,盡管老套,那也是“斧斧”生輝。(突然看到韓國再次扣押我國漁船的新聞,先鄙視一下)考前的YY里已經(jīng)把最有效的方式給了大家,就照寫吧(佛祖會(huì)保佑信文都的孩子的!)。昨天微博(新浪,騰訊)再次針對(duì)具體寫作的思路內(nèi)容給出了建議,不負(fù)眾望,也有部分內(nèi)容命中。
下面徐可風(fēng)就結(jié)合考前給出的模式,加上考前徐可風(fēng)的預(yù)測內(nèi)容,按照四級(jí)閱卷要求,寫一份符合四級(jí)閱卷要求的的考場參考文章,以供參考。
、 Nowadays, there is a widespread concern over excessive packaging in our country.
、 It is known to all that excessive packaging has negative influences on consumers.
、 And people would turn pale at the very mention of excessive packaging.
、 There are many reasons why excessive packaging emerges, but in general, they come down to three major ones.
② For one thing, I argue, Chinese consumers care more about packaging than product itself.
、 For another, the packaging often represents the quality of product, so the manufacturer is eager to do excessive packaging.
④ But the prime reason is perhaps that the department concerned turns a blind eye to this irrational phenomenon.
、 In regard to this problem, steps should be taken to minimize it.
、 The first thing we should do is to emphasize product's quality over its packaging.
、 Another thing we can do is to strengthen the supervision on excessive packaging.
、 In addition, the Weibo is one of the most effective media that remind consumers to spend reasonably.
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