There are advantage for students to work while 1. _______
studying at school. One of them was that 2. _______
they can earn money. For the most part, 3. _______
students working to earn money for their own 4. _______
use. Earning their own money allow them 5. _______
to spend on anything as if they please. 6. _______
They would have to ask their parents for 7. _______
money or for permission to do things by 8. _______
the money. Some students may also to save 9. _______
up for our college or future use. 10. _______
答案及解析
1. advantage改為advantages。應(yīng)使用可數(shù)名詞的復(fù)數(shù)形式。
2. was改為is。時態(tài)和整篇文章的時態(tài)不一致。
3. 此行無錯誤。
4. working改為work。此句缺少謂語動詞。
5. allow改為allows。主謂不一致, 動名詞做主語謂語用單數(shù)。
6. 刪除if。此處please作不及物動詞, 意為“喜歡, 想要”, as引導(dǎo)定語從句, 修飾先行詞anything。
7. would 后添加not。上下文邏輯有誤。
8. by改為with。by表示“使用”時, 其后不能使用定冠詞the, 故改為with。
9. 去掉to。may為情態(tài)動詞, 其后應(yīng)使用動詞原形。
10. our改為their。代詞的指代不一致, 指代第三人稱復(fù)數(shù)形式的物主代詞應(yīng)為their。
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