專項(xiàng)高分突破：名師幫你修改考研英語作文(5)

第二篇

2007年真題

Directions:

Write a litter to your university library, making suggestions for improving its service.

You should write about 100 words on ANSWER SHEET 2.

Do not sign your own name at the end of the letter. Use "Li Ming" instead.

Do not write the address.

To Whom It May Concern,

　　As a student of this university, I would like to take the opportunity to express my appreciation for your kind assistance as always (\). Meanwhile, I feel that it would be beneficial to express my views concerning the quality of the library service.

　　In the first place, I find that most keyboards of the library computers are in poor operation (condition), which brings much inconvenience to the users. I would also recommend (suggest) the library to improve the efficiency of purchasing new books and subscribing to academic journals. Last but not least, the study rooms need to be furnished with a better lighting system.

　　I hope that you take my suggestions into serious consideration.

　　Yours sincerely,

Li Ming

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