專項高分突破：名師幫你修改考研英語作文(5)

第五篇

2006年真題

Directions:

You want to contribute to Project Hope by offering financial aid to a child in a remote area. Write a letter to the department concerned, asking them to help find a candidate. You should specify what kind of child you want to help and how you will carry out your plan.

You should write about 100 words on ANSWER SHEET 2.Do not sign your own name at the end of the letter. Use "Li Ming" instead.Do not write the address.

To Whom It May Concern,

　　My name is Li Ming,(.) (I am) a college student of Peking University, and I am writing in the hope of your assistance to find a needy child for whom I may provide financial support.

　　First and foremost I would like to declare that I possess the financial ability to implement (am financially capable of implementing) this plan owing to my decent income from part-time jobs. As (With regard) to the candidate, I am hoping (hope) that he/she (should) comes (come) from an elementary school of the less developed areas of Western China, who (and) is forced out of school. I would like to pay for his/her tuition fee (\) and other school expenses until he/she graduates from university.

　　Thank you for your time.

　　Yours cordially,

Li Ming

Sara點評：7分，這是比較典型的信件類小作文，文章邏輯清晰！需要注意的是連接詞的應(yīng)用！還有不小的上升空間，繼續(xù)加油！