新東方大學(xué)英語(yǔ)四級(jí)考試沖刺班內(nèi)部筆記(寫(xiě)作)

　　范文1. Is a Test of Spoken English Necessary?

　　A test of spoken English will be included as an optional component of the College English Test (CET). Some people argue that it is absolutely necessary to hold a test of spoken English in China because we have been informed frequently that a Chinese student who has been learning English for over ten years cannot even communicate with a native speaker. Sometimes even those top students who excel in grammar and writing skills find their English inadequate to express their thoughts freely. A test of English will bring the college students an awareness of the importance of oral English, and will thus help them with their communicating skills.

　　使句子具有表現(xiàn)力的手段：1、用形容詞修飾名詞;2、副詞修飾動(dòng)詞、副詞修飾形容詞

　　On the other hand, some others still maintain that a good command of reading and writing skills will be enough for the English learners. To some extent their opinion derives from the fact that students are already under considerable pressure from their opinion derives from the fact that students are already under considerable pressure from their coursework. Another required test will only add to their burden. Moreover, some students may take the shortcut by focusing on several guessed questions according to the fixed format of the test, hoping for a coincidence to bring them good luck.

　　In my opinion, a test of spoken English will do more good than harm. Since China will continue its policy of opening and reform, the ability to speak English fluently is a must for anyone who wants to surpass others in a highly competitive society. Whether I take the test or not, I shall spare no efforts to practice oral English in the remaining years of my college study.

　　范文21. Should smoking be banned?

　　Should smoking be banned? Answers to this question vary greatly. Some people are in favor of the idea of smoking. They always say that it can get rid of the tiredness and make them refreshed. And they also say that giving and being given cigarettes is a sign of friendship. Therefore, they carry cigarettes with them wherever they go.

　　注：1. vary greatly 許多種2. be in favor of = agree/ be of the opinion that

　　3. get rid of the tiredness and make them refreshed 使人神清氣爽

　　4. Giving and being given 給與被給。主、被動(dòng)關(guān)系在英文中用現(xiàn)在、過(guò)去分詞表達(dá)。

　　But other people consider it very harmful to people’s health. They have heard the official reports that one person in the world dies from smoking every second. And they have heard the doctor’s warning that smokers are more likely to have lung cancer and to increase their chances of having heart attack. In addition, smoking pollutes the air and may cause fire accidents. Thus it has become a major threat to people’s life and property.

　　注：1.They have heard the official reports that ... 官方報(bào)告表明.. 2. be more likely to 更有可能，更容易3. chance 可能

　　There is some truth in both arguments, but human’s life and property outweighs anything else. If smoking brings us illness and death, why not have it banned by the government? Without cigarettes, can’t we come up with better ways to express our friendship and to make us refreshed?注：1. outweigh 比……重要，同樣的表達(dá)：be superior to/ be inferior to。overweight 超重2. 最后用兩句反問(wèn)句結(jié)尾，非常精妙。

　　課后作業(yè) Private Cars

　　寫(xiě)成4段的首段寫(xiě)法：

　　① In recent years, with fast economic growth, private cars have appeared in many families in China. People's attitude toward private cars varies widely.

　　② With the increase in the general standard of living, some ordinary Chinese families begin to afford a private car. Yet, people's opinions of private cars vary from person to person/ public attitude toward it varies greatly/ widely./ is quite of the contrary./ differs sharply.

　�、� In recent few years, the phenomenon/ issue/ problem of owning a private car has been brought to public attention/ in the limelight. People's views on/ opinions of owing a private car vary widely.

　　寫(xiě)成3段的首段寫(xiě)法：

　　With the development of modern society/ science and technology, / With the improvement of people's living standard,

　　more and more people can own private cars.

　　cars are entering ordinary families.

　　the growing number of people/ people in ever increasing numbers can have access to private cars.(此句是引言)

　　支持段的主題句：

　　Some people claim that/ As is pointed out that/ It is generally believed that/ It is widely accepted that, there are some advantages of owning a private car.

　　There is no doubt that private cars benefit people hugely.

　　支持段的分論點(diǎn)：

　�、� 方便 First, private cars provide people with the most convenient form of transportation.

　�、� 舒適 Second, it is comfortable for people to travel in, especially in changeable weather/ raining days/ sand storm.

　�、� 炫耀 Third, only a private car can show a person's social status/ achievement/ success/ prosperity in his or her career.

　　否定段的主題句：① However (Nonetheless/ Nevertheless/ But), there are some disadvantages of owing a private car/ Every coin has two sides.

　　② While enjoying the convenience that private cars bring us, we should not ignore the problem they create/ produce/ introduce/ make.

　�、� Despite/ In spite of/ For all the advantages, they brings their own disadvantages/ problems/ negative effects

　　④ Like anything else, private cars also have their own weakness/ limits.

　�、� However, private cars are not without shortcomings/ faults.

　�、� Yet other speak of the problems private cars have brought. They complain that......

　�、� However, private cars may also bring with it problems our society had not previously faced.

　　⑧ Despite the increase in efficiency and convenience generated by private cars, the changes they bring could very well lead to potentially adverse consequences.

　　否定段的分論點(diǎn)：

　�、� 占有空間 On the one hand, private cars take up/ occupy too much space.

　　② 交通事故 On the other hand, a driver should be careful/ cautious while driving, otherwise, car accidents are more likely to happen.

　�、� 污染環(huán)境 What's more/In addition, private cars give off/ discharge/ release CO which pollute the environment/ air.

　　注意：所謂上義詞是指抽象、概括和籠統(tǒng)的，就是比較superordinate的詞;而下義詞就是具體的東西，即subordinate的東西。

　　第四段(總結(jié)段)的寫(xiě)法：

　�、� Despite all the disadvantages mentioned above, I still think that the advantages outweigh/ are greater than the disadvantages. As for the above problem, I'm sure they will be settled by the scientists in the future/ It is only a matter of time for the problems to be solved.

　�、� Unquestionably, the challenge of private cars means we all should consider how we can control them, so that they will not control us.

　�、� Whether the private cars are a blessing or a curse is a difficult question to answer, yet the desire for the comfort and independence a private car can bring will not be elminated.

　　④ Anyway/ Anyhow/ In any case, whether the effect is good or bad, one thing is certain: private cars have changed and will continue to change the way of our transportation, our leisure and our life.

　　選擇題型變體邏輯結(jié)構(gòu)(My View on Sth.)

　　選擇性觀點(diǎn)的變體的文章寫(xiě)作邏輯結(jié)構(gòu)：

　　Paragraph I:(1)引出將要評(píng)論的事物或者是觀點(diǎn); (2)簡(jiǎn)明扼要的提出人們?cè)谶@個(gè)問(wèn)題上的兩種不同看法。

　　Paragraph II:(1)提出作者觀點(diǎn)(本文主題句);

　　(2)舉例加以論證。

　　Paragraph III:(1)總結(jié)全文(再次強(qiáng)調(diào)作者觀點(diǎn))

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