名師示范英語(yǔ)六級(jí)寫(xiě)作套路：分三步展開(kāi)

　　從觀點(diǎn)的多個(gè)層次描寫(xiě)(如果開(kāi)始段落涉及觀點(diǎn)可以融合，則最大程度上進(jìn)行融合)：1，打工能夠鍛煉獨(dú)立性，了解社會(huì)，為畢業(yè)以及學(xué)習(xí)動(dòng)力做好準(zhǔn)備2，大部分錢(qián)依靠父母，學(xué)生的主要職責(zé)是多學(xué)。

　　First and foremost, working part-time offers a chance to know the society well and develop your independence, thus supplying motivation for even harder work at school(為學(xué)校努力學(xué)習(xí)提供動(dòng)力) and making preparations for graduation. Secondly but equally important, relying on parents for most of the education fee helps you overcome the worry of money (克服錢(qián)的麻煩)and the unnecessary disturbance of work(工作不必要的打擾), so that you can concentrate on your major task as a student: study.

　　個(gè)人認(rèn)為最好是兩者結(jié)合，要注意處理之間的關(guān)系，不能本末倒置。

　　As far as I am concerned, I will combine these two ways. However, they should be properly balanced. Most important, we should never put the cart before the horse.(本末倒置)

　　E 2003.1 It pays to be honest

　　--〉社會(huì)上不誠(chéng)實(shí)，欺詐的現(xiàn)象越來(lái)越多(如果正面不好發(fā)揮，則反其道行之)。(欺詐現(xiàn)象的具體：學(xué)校，商場(chǎng)，人才市場(chǎng)等等)。

　　The world is becoming less honest(世人越來(lái)越不誠(chéng)實(shí)). People cheat in one form or anther(欺騙的方式形形色色). In schools, lazy students cheat to pass exams; in shops, greedy businessmen sell fake product (假貨)to make dirty money; and in job fairs, desperate people make up experiences to win a chance.

　　從觀點(diǎn)的多個(gè)層次描寫(xiě)：欺騙是飲鴆止渴。1，欺騙的初期能夠帶來(lái)額外利潤(rùn)然長(zhǎng)期以往則是名聲的損毀以及消費(fèi)者的不認(rèn)可 2，欺騙固然能夠使人在特定的情況下逃出困境或者獲益，但是需要用更多的欺騙來(lái)圓場(chǎng)，最終喪失人們的信任。

　　However common cheating is becoming, it does more harm than good to those who cheat(害人害己). To begin with, cheating can, to some extent, help you out of a difficult situation (幫助你擺脫困境)or brings benefits. However, as a proverb(諺語(yǔ)) goes “one lie necessarily leads to more ”(一個(gè)謊言需要更多的謊言來(lái)圓場(chǎng)), you need more lies to cover first lie(對(duì)前面諺語(yǔ)的解釋). In the long run, you will lose trust from people around, above and below you.(你周?chē)�的人以及上下�?jí)) What’s more, cheating brings extra profits at the beginning yet erodes reputation(腐蝕名聲) and costs you the faith of consumers in the end,(最終讓你喪失客戶(hù)的信任) as no one can cheat all the people all the time.

　　個(gè)人認(rèn)為不能欺騙，有悖道德，害人害己。同時(shí)需要加強(qiáng)法律監(jiān)督。