名師示范英語(yǔ)六級(jí)寫(xiě)作套路：分三步展開(kāi)

　　In my opinion, we should never cheat. Dishonesty runs against our traditional virtue (與傳統(tǒng)美德相背離)and does harm to those who cheat. Meanwhile, we need to put in place powerful laws.

　　F 2003, 12 reduce waste on campus

　　--〉校園里浪費(fèi)現(xiàn)象很?chē)?yán)重(體現(xiàn)：食物，水龍頭，電器，小館子吃飯等等)

　　Waste problem increasingly stands out in schools.(浪費(fèi)現(xiàn)象日益突出) In the canteen, students throw away more than they eat; in the washroom, the tap is never turned off; even in an empty classroom, the lights are always on. Similar examples have virtually become a staple on campus(類(lèi)似的例子成了學(xué)校的一道風(fēng)景線(xiàn)/舉不勝舉)

　　從觀點(diǎn)的多個(gè)層次描寫(xiě)：浪費(fèi)不好 1，資源有限，浪費(fèi)普遍資源則后代倒霉

　　1， 養(yǎng)成不良習(xí)慣為以后的工作生活增加負(fù)擔(dān)3，與節(jié)儉的傳統(tǒng)美德相背離;在高等學(xué)府里浪費(fèi)更是教育的恥辱。

　　Waste, whenever it happens, should be condemned (譴責(zé))for the following reasons. Firstly, in this populous country(人口眾多的國(guó)家), we have relatively limited resources. If we go on wasting human’s common resources, our decedents will suffer from hunger or even starve(挨餓). What’s more, such a behavior on campus will lead to a bad habit in your later work or life. Your expenses (花銷(xiāo))will rise as a result. Lat but not least, waste, on whatever occasion, goes against our traditional virtue(傳統(tǒng)價(jià)值觀) and puts to shame our education.(讓我們的教育蒙羞)

　　個(gè)人認(rèn)為浪費(fèi)不好，需要共同努力，學(xué)校對(duì)學(xué)生說(shuō)服教育，個(gè)人也要加強(qiáng)自覺(jué)。

　　From my point of view, waste is everything to be blamed. We need to join hands for the solution of this problem. The school should educate the students while the individuals should cooperate and behave themselves.

　　G 1996.6 health gained in developing countries(圖標(biāo)類(lèi)文章不能生硬的簡(jiǎn)單描述。)

　　à 圖標(biāo)表明壽命從40-60短短30年漲了20年，比較而言，兒童死亡從-下降到--，降幅達(dá)到。什么促成了這個(gè)現(xiàn)象

　　As clearly stated in the graph, life expectancy increased dramatically, up from 40 to 60, in 30 years. By contrast, infant mortality dropped by 15%, down from 25% to 10% during the same period. What has contributed to this development?

　　從觀點(diǎn)的多個(gè)層次描寫(xiě)：1，醫(yī)療技術(shù)的進(jìn)展，治愈頑疾，搶救兒童2，生活水平的提高(吃住)，追求健康飲食和適當(dāng)鍛煉3 技術(shù)降低災(zāi)害的損失，其中婦女，兒童最倒霉。

　　First and foremost, the advance in medical science and technology has enabled us to cure many originally fatal diseases(治愈原本致命的疾病) and save millions of babies that could have died before, at or after birth. (出生前，出身時(shí)，出身后)The second reason has much to do with a good system(第二個(gè)原因與—有關(guān)) in which everyone is covered by timely medi-care(每個(gè)人享受免費(fèi)醫(yī)療). What’s more, people now enjoy a happier life. No longer satisfied with a full stomach and warm clothing(不僅僅滿(mǎn)足吃飽穿暖), we turn to a balanced diet (將注意力轉(zhuǎn)向均衡飲食)and go in for physical exercises(參加體育運(yùn)動(dòng)). Last but not least, technology has reduced the occurrence /incidence (發(fā)生)of disasters as well as minimized the damages and injuries(姜損傷和危害降到最低). Otherwise, women and children would suffer most.

　　個(gè)人認(rèn)為好現(xiàn)象，但是需要控制人口增長(zhǎng)，否則前途未卜。

　　In my opinion, this means people can live a longer and better life. However, only god knows whether this is a curse or bless if the population explosion is not brought under control.