恩波《考研英語考前30天狂背作文》下載六

Directions 3
Study the following drawing carefully and write an essay in which you should:
1. describe the drawing,
2. analyze the reasons why it is difficult for university graduates to find a job, and
3. point out the possible ways to solve the problem.
You should write 160~200 words neatly on ANSWER SHEET 2.

審題：
《招員工七名》 這篇文章關注的是當前重要的就業(yè)難問題。它的要求非常明確，在描述圖畫后，先給出原因，再給出解決辦法，這是非常常見的文章模式。
Sample:
The recruiting fair in the above drawing is filled with young graduates each holding a pile of resumes in their hands. Around a desk in the front of the drawing, there are dozens of students waiting to hand in their resumes but only seven are wanted by the company as is written on a board beside the desk.
It is clear that the drawer wants to draw our attention to the difficulty that today’s university graduates are faced with in finding a job. In fact, in many universities and colleges, the employment rate of graduates is lower than 50% and much fewer can find a satisfactory job. The reasons for this situation can be listed as follows. In the first place, the enrolment expansion of universities and colleges has resulted in a great increase in the number of graduates every year, which has exceeded the increase in positions in the job market. What makes things worse is that quite a lot of students like to choose those hot majors when they enter the university and to look for jobs in big developed cities when they graduate. So it is even more difficult for them to find a suitable job.
From my point of view, the society and the graduates need to join their hands in the endeavor to solve this problem. On the one hand, the society should continue to focus on economic development so as to provide bigger employment chances for the graduates. On the other hand, the students should choose the majors that they are really interested in and well capable of and broaden their horizon when looking for jobs. Only in this way can they gain larger space for their future career.

點評：
該文分為三段，第一段描述圖畫，第二段對此問題進行了小結，而后給出了原因。第三段提出了解決問題的辦法。

第一段共用兩句話，第一句是遠景，第二句由遠及近，展示了求職者之多與實際招聘人數(shù)之少。第二段共分六句話，前兩句總結了大學畢業(yè)生就業(yè)難這一情況，第三句話是原因類的模板句。第四句話說擴招帶來的影響。第五句話和第六句話說大學生選擇熱門的專業(yè)，使就業(yè)難的矛盾更加突出。第三段共分四句話，第一句話是總括句，說社會和畢業(yè)生應攜起手來解決問題，而后分兩句話分別說明。最后一句話是總結，使用了語氣強烈的倒裝句。
心得：
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