Direction 29
Study the following picture carefully and write an essay in which you should:
1. describe the picture；
2. point out the serious consequences of this phenomenon；
3. suggest possible solutions.
You should write 160~200 words neatly on ANSWER SHEET 2.
審題：
該題談?wù)摿耸且粋�(gè)非常令人擔(dān)憂的現(xiàn)象——許多學(xué)生沉迷于網(wǎng)絡(luò)游戲和網(wǎng)上聊天。結(jié)構(gòu)非常清晰，分為三個(gè)部分——描述圖畫，說明危害，提出解決辦法。我們可按照提綱來構(gòu)建我們的文章，將文章分成三段來寫。
Sample:
In the net bar, those who are present are obviously all school children. Different are the things they are doing on computers—some are playing games and some are chatting online; but the same are the expressions they wear before the computers—attentive and addicted. It seems that they are so absorbed in the unreal world that they may not notice anything around them in the real world.
As is known to all, the addiction to net games and chat can do great harm to children. First of all, it will affect their study by taking up a lot of time and energy. Secondly, radiation from computers will harm their health, especially their eyes. In addition, their indulging in the unreal world will have negative influence on their communication with people in the real world, and thus will hamper the development of their personality and mental health.
From my point of view, in order to solve this problem, the primary responsibility falls on parents, who are supposed to have more significant influence on the growth of children. By improving mutual communication, they can establish a better relationship with the children, make them feel they are cared and understood, and reasonably direct their interests. Next come teachers and schools, who, undoubtedly, play an important role in children’s education. Besides teaching knowledge in class, they should help children develop various interests to fill their afterclass time, such as sports and scientific invention. In my belief, the problem of children’s addiction in net games and chat can be solved through efficient communication and proper guidance.
點(diǎn)評(píng)：
文章的第一段是描述圖畫。共分三句話，第一句話說網(wǎng)吧里都是學(xué)生。第二句采用對(duì)比法，說不同的是有的打游戲，有的上網(wǎng)聊天，可相同的是都那樣專注。第三句采用結(jié)果狀語從句，充分描述了他們此時(shí)的狀態(tài)。
第二段首句是段落的主題句。而后分三個(gè)方面來談，第一點(diǎn)是影響學(xué)習(xí)；第二點(diǎn)是有害健康；第三點(diǎn)是對(duì)個(gè)人成長(zhǎng)極為不利。
第三段分兩個(gè)方面來說，即家長(zhǎng)和教師，結(jié)構(gòu)極為清晰。最后一句話是結(jié)論，是對(duì)前面兩點(diǎn)（共四句話）的總結(jié)。
心得：
該文章是典型的“現(xiàn)象——后果——辦法”模式的文章，通過分析圖畫和文章，我們可以迅速確定文章的結(jié)構(gòu)和發(fā)展，這是非常重要的。
