考研英語小作文指導：破解應用文寫作

（七）建議信

1．寫作攻略
　　建議信是向收信人對某事提出寫信人的建議和忠告。建議信有可能是寫給個人，就其遇到的某個問題提出自己的看法和觀點；也可能是寫給某個組織和機構，就改進其服務提出建議或忠告。建議信要寫出寫信的原因，建議的內(nèi)容，提出建議的理由，提出的理由要入情入理，語氣一定要禮貌當先。因此建議信要寫得簡明扼要、目的明確、具有合理性和說服力。具體寫作步驟：
　　首段：表明寫作意圖。陳述事由，簡單介紹自己，注意語氣。
　　主體段落：應該首先肯定對方的優(yōu)點，然后再寫需要改進的地方或針對具體情況提出具體建議或忠告�！　　　∏�萬注意不要讓別人以為你是在投訴，而不是提建議。
　　結尾段：對提出的建議進行總結，要注意有禮貌使讀者容易接受。
　　寫作這類題目時，考生要注意不要跑題，因為這類題很有可能寫成議論文，如“我認為一……二……，所以要如何如何”�？忌鷳�該時刻記得書信的交際功能，要考慮到收信人的感受。在給對方提建議時應該時時說到I和You，要讓人時刻感受到這是一種交流。

2．必背模版句型

I would like to suggest that...
我想建議……

I am writing to express my views concerning...
我寫信來是要表達有關……我的看法。

You have asked for my advice with regard to... and I will try to make some suggestions.
你問我有關……的事情，我會嘗試著提出一些建議。

If I were you, I would...
如果我是你，我會……

It seems to me that you could...
我認為你可以……

I think it would be more beneficial if you could...
我想如果你能……，可能會更好。

I believe you will take my advice into account.
我相信你會認真考慮我的建議的。

I hope you will find these proposals/suggestions/recommendations practical/useful/helpful.
我希望這些建議/意見/看法對你來說實用/有用/有幫助。

I will be more than happy to see improvements in this regard.
如果這方面有所改善我會非常開心的。

I will be ready for further discussing this matter into details.
我時刻準備著就此事進行更詳盡的討論。
3．必背經(jīng)典范文

Dear Mary，
　　I am sorry to hear that you have been ill for days and hope you have got better now. You have studied so hard that you have had no time for exercise. This is harmful for your health. You have been in poor health these years. I feel it would be more beneficial to your health if you could take more exercise in future.
　　Do not think that time spent in exercise is wasted. Exercise can improve your physical constitution and refresh the mind. After one or two hours of exercise you can study better. Only when you have a strong body can you keep on studying without felling fatigue. Otherwise your study will be interrupted from time to time by fatigue or sickness.
　　I am not advising you to devote all your time to exercise. What I want to say is that exercise is as useful and important as your study. I hope you can take at least one hour�餾 exercise every day after you are recovered. I would be more than happy to see you have a stronger body.

Sincerely yours,
John

譯文

親愛的瑪麗：
　　聽說你近來病了許多天，使我感到很不安。但愿你現(xiàn)在好些了。由于你平時學習太累了，缺乏運動的時間，這對你的健康很不利。這些年來你身體一直不好，我想如果你今后多參加體育活動肯定會對身體有很多好處。
　　不要把鍛煉看成是浪費時間。鍛煉可以增強你的身體素質，使你更有精神。運動一兩個小時可以增加你的學習效率。只有有了強健的身體才能高效的學習而不覺疲倦，否則疲勞或疾病就會影響學習。
我并不是勸你把時間都用在鍛煉上，我只是想說鍛煉和學習一樣，同是有益而且是重要的。我希望你復原后能每天至少鍛煉一個小時�？吹侥阌袀�強壯的身體，我會非常高興的。

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