臨近考研兩個月,很多同學(xué)都在熱火朝天的奮戰(zhàn),當(dāng)然部分想要提高的同學(xué),想走快速途徑,今天老師帶大家一起學(xué)習(xí)快速提高大作文寫作分值的方法(英語一和英語二同樣適用)。
方法一:在名詞后面添加短語作定語或者定語從句。
使句子變長變難的方法之一就是給句子中的名詞添加定語。而單純的添加形容詞作定語,一方面已經(jīng)無法滿足同學(xué)們對于整篇寫作字?jǐn)?shù)的要求,另一方面也無法滿足閱卷老師對于學(xué)生寫作語言多樣性的要求,所以我們在給名詞添加定語時,盡量添加稍長一點的短語作定語或者定語從句。具體應(yīng)該如何操作呢,比如:2017年英語一
對于圖片的描述,很多同學(xué)可能會簡單地敘述為:A boy says“I have so many books.”, while another boy makes his mind to finish 20 books this year. 這樣的敘述雖然語法上是正確的,但是沒辦法讓句子變得豐富,所以我們可以給本句話中的名詞添加短語作定語。比如boy后面可以添加定語,定語的方向可以觀察人物的狀態(tài),圖片中男孩的狀態(tài)是lying in a sofa lazily with a crossing legs. 同理,另外一個男孩的狀態(tài)就可以描述為who is so absorbed in his book. 這樣經(jīng)過調(diào)整,本句就可以調(diào)整為:A boy lying in a sofa lazily with a crossing legs says“I have so many books.”, while another boy who is so absorbed in his book makes his mind to finish 20 books this year. 最終,這個句子不管從字?jǐn)?shù)上還是句式難度上,都更加出彩。
方法二:簡單粗暴地使用固定句式。
對于基礎(chǔ)薄弱,句式多樣性掌握不多的同學(xué),可以直接使用這種方法,把自己寫的簡單句嵌套進(jìn)給定的句式結(jié)構(gòu),簡單粗暴。比如,還是2017年英語一,我們可以直接把我們剛剛寫好的句子“A boy says“I have so many books.”, while another boy makes his mind to finish 20 books this year.” 嵌套到這樣的結(jié)構(gòu)中:”as is vividly described in the picture, ..., which captures my eyes”。最終,這個句子就變成了:As is vividly described in the picture, a boy lying in a sofa lazily with a crossing legs says“I have so many books.”, while another boy who is so absorbed in his book makes his mind to finish 20 books this year, which captures my eyes. 經(jīng)過調(diào)整,這個句子長達(dá)50個單詞,一篇大作文,略微有一兩個這種句式多樣且字?jǐn)?shù)長的句子加持,從完成度和得分上來說,對同學(xué)們來說應(yīng)該會很容易做到。
但是,前提條件是,在同學(xué)們的大腦儲備中已經(jīng)有了不少這種成型的句式,這里老師給大家列舉一些,同學(xué)們可以直接背誦:
As is vividly described in the picture, ..., which captures my eyes.
It is depicted in the picture that..., which arouses my curiosity.
Here comes the picture that ..., which is very interesting.
What makes me curious is that ...
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